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Petroleum Exporting

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by gmat009 » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:18 pm
The Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC) had long been expected to announce a reduction in output to bolster sagging oil prices, but officials of the organization just recently announced that the group will pare daily production by 1.5 million barrels by the beginning of next year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output by a total of 500,000 barrels a day.

A. year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output
B. year, but only if the output of non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, is trimmed
C. year only if the output of non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, would be trimmed
D. year only if non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were trimming output
E.year only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, trim output

Which one is better C or E and why
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by Gmatss » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:46 pm
I would go with C since the focus here is the Output of the nations, not the nations itself
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by warlock » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:47 pm
IN c , Norway, Mexico, and Russia, would be trimmed suggests that these nations will be trimmed instead of Output.


I would go with E
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by Gmatss » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:49 pm
warlock wrote:IN c , Norway, Mexico, and Russia, would be trimmed suggests that these nations will be trimmed instead of Output.


I would go with E
E does exactly the opposite of your argument. only if "Output" u can get rid of "of the opec nations" and you can clearly see C is correct
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by stop@800 » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:14 pm
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by chase4meg » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:41 pm
IMO E
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by rohangupta83 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:32 am
imo: E

C is wordy
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by mals24 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:44 am
IMO also E for the same reason sited by Warlock.
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by vivek.kapoor83 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:01 am
isnt would be trimmed modifying Output. or is it modifying countries. Can anybody explain with reason,
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by bhavika22 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:50 am
The Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC) had long been expected to announce a reduction in output to bolster sagging oil prices, but officials of the organization just recently announced that the group will pare daily production by 1.5 million barrels by the beginning of next year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output by a total of 500,000 barrels a day.

A. year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output
B. year, but only if the output of non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, is trimmed
C. year only if the output of non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, would be trimmed
D. year only if non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were trimming output
E.year only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, trim output

C is definitely not right and its easy to guess by looking at the idiomatic expression. Option C ends in "Would be trimmed" by a total of .....

the correct expression is "trimmed to" not "Trimmed by"

E fits best!
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by bhavika22 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:50 am
The Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC) had long been expected to announce a reduction in output to bolster sagging oil prices, but officials of the organization just recently announced that the group will pare daily production by 1.5 million barrels by the beginning of next year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output by a total of 500,000 barrels a day.

A. year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output
B. year, but only if the output of non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, is trimmed
C. year only if the output of non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, would be trimmed
D. year only if non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were trimming output
E.year only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, trim output

C is definitely not right and its easy to guess by looking at the idiomatic expression. Option C ends in "Would be trimmed" by a total of .....

the correct expression is "trimmed to" not "Trimmed by"

E fits best!
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by Gmatss » Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:08 am
bhavika22 wrote:The Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC) had long been expected to announce a reduction in output to bolster sagging oil prices, but officials of the organization just recently announced that the group will pare daily production by 1.5 million barrels by the beginning of next year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output by a total of 500,000 barrels a day.

A. year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output
B. year, but only if the output of non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, is trimmed
C. year only if the output of non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, would be trimmed
D. year only if non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were trimming output
E.year only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, trim output

C is definitely not right and its easy to guess by looking at the idiomatic expression. Option C ends in "Would be trimmed" by a total of .....

the correct expression is "trimmed to" not "Trimmed by"

E fits best!
where do u get "Trimmed to" in E it says "trim ouput by" also.. am i missing something?
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by Gmatss » Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:12 am
after re-reading i think E does sound better, cause it's in simple present tense.
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Re: Petroleum Exporting

by Stockmoose16 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:53 am
gmat009 wrote:The Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC) had long been expected to announce a reduction in output to bolster sagging oil prices, but officials of the organization just recently announced that the group will pare daily production by 1.5 million barrels by the beginning of next year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output by a total of 500,000 barrels a day.

A. year, but only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were to trim output
B. year, but only if the output of non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, is trimmed
C. year only if the output of non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, would be trimmed
D. year only if non-OPEC nations, which includes Norway, Mexico, and Russia, were trimming output
E.year only if non-OPEC nations, including Norway, Mexico, and Russia, trim output

Which one is better C or E and why
The answer is neither C or E, IMO. You need the second 'but' to transition the sentence, and "were" is subjunctive mood, which makes sense here. I believe the answer should be "A." What's the OA?
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by vivek.kapoor83 » Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:03 am
oa pls
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