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by BTGmoderatorDC » Mon Nov 26, 2018 5:00 pm

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Unlike the southern United States, where golfers can usually enjoy fair weather year round, the snow in the northern United States limits golf generally to the non-winter months.

A Unlike the southern United States, where golfers can usually enjoy fair weather year round, the snow in the northern United States
B Unlike the fair weather golfers can usually enjoy year round in the southern United States, the snow in the northern U.S.
C Unlike the southern United States, where golfers can usually enjoy fair weather year round, the northern United States' snow
D Unlike the fair weather's golfers can usually enjoy year round in the southern United States, the snow in the northern U.S.
E Unlike the golfers in the southern United States that can usually enjoy fair weather year round, the snow in the northern United States

OA B

Source: Princeton Review
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by deloitte247 » Thu Nov 29, 2018 9:04 am
In this question, we are going to explore Parallelism at its peak. So, we shall check the two elements if they correlate or if they are in parallel.
First of all, let's understand what the question entails.

Southern US is different from Northern US. In Southern US, golfers can usually enjoy fair weather year round in Northern US, the snow limits golf generally to the non-winter months.
So, we need to compare either South to North, or the weather in South with the weather in North.

Option A - incorrect
This compares South with the weather in North. Definitely wrong parallelism.

Option B - correct
Here, the weather in South is compared with the weather in North. Definitely a perfect parallelism.

Option C - incorrect
In this option, there's a comparison between South and the snow in the North. This doesn't follows parallelism.

Option D - incorrect
fair weather's golfers; this is an illogical construction

Option E - incorrect
The parallelism here is between golfers and snow. However, that is not the major comparison. The comparison is thus illogical.
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