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by reachac » Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:01 am
In C, "closely resembled" without the use of "that" is awkward, also C seem to suggest that the resemblance that once existed is no more there.
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by drgmatIL » Fri Aug 08, 2008 8:36 am
in A there is no parall... problem "and closely" ?
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by reachac » Fri Aug 08, 2008 10:29 am
drgmatIL wrote:in A there is no parall... problem "and closely" ?[/quote
Sorry but couldnt get ur point, can u elaborate.
Btw A has perfect parallelism in that both the items connected by the conjunction 'and' are in present tense.
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by drgmatIL » Fri Aug 08, 2008 10:36 am
reachac,

distant relative .... and closly .... are not parral...

please explain to me the parallelism
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by reachac » Fri Aug 08, 2008 10:46 am
drgmatIL wrote:reachac,

distant relative .... and closly .... are not parral...

please explain to me the parallelism
Ok leme try, Im real bad at explaining it to other tough pls pardon my shortcomin.

Wat do u think of this construction.

X is Y and X does Z??

Seems parallel?
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by drgmatIL » Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:47 pm
reachac,
not for me :)
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