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by GmatKiss » Tue Apr 03, 2012 6:34 am
The number of mountain gorillas is declining with such rapidity that the population is one-half in the twenty years between a count made by George Schaller in 1960 and the one made by Dian Fossey in 1980.

(A) with such rapidity that the population is one-half
(B) with such rapidity that the population was one-half
(C) so rapidly the population divided in half
(D) so rapidly that the population was halved
(E) in such rapidity that the population is halved
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by Vanshika21 » Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:01 am
Confused between D and E again.. what's the OA?
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by sam2304 » Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:23 am
So X that Y.

IMO D.
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by Bill@VeritasPrep » Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:32 am
The 2/3 split is "rapidity" (A, B, and E) vs "so rapidly" (C and D) "So rapidly" is more direct, so we'll eliminate A, B, and E.

C says the population "divided in half"; by using active voice, it makes it sound like the population divided itself.

D uses the passive voice "was halved," which makes it clear that something else is doing the halving.
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by killer1387 » Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:44 am
STRAIGHT D
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by penguinfoot » Wed Apr 04, 2012 8:52 am
IMO C
Why ? Because the verb tense was vs in is clearly sited with the indicator - "In the past twenty years"

-> Past tense of in the last twenty years !
-> 1960 to 1980, the verb tense indicate is pointered at 1980.
-> GMAT prefers active voice - ALWAYS !

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