The number of mountain gorillas is declining with such rapidity that the population is one-half in the twenty years between a count made by George Schaller in 1960 and the one made by Dian Fossey in 1980.
(A) with such rapidity that the population is one-half
(B) with such rapidity that the population was one-half
(C) so rapidly the population divided in half
(D) so rapidly that the population was halved
(E) in such rapidity that the population is halved
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So X that Y.
IMO D.
IMO D.
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The 2/3 split is "rapidity" (A, B, and E) vs "so rapidly" (C and D) "So rapidly" is more direct, so we'll eliminate A, B, and E.
C says the population "divided in half"; by using active voice, it makes it sound like the population divided itself.
D uses the passive voice "was halved," which makes it clear that something else is doing the halving.
C says the population "divided in half"; by using active voice, it makes it sound like the population divided itself.
D uses the passive voice "was halved," which makes it clear that something else is doing the halving.
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IMO C
Why ? Because the verb tense was vs in is clearly sited with the indicator - "In the past twenty years"
-> Past tense of in the last twenty years !
-> 1960 to 1980, the verb tense indicate is pointered at 1980.
-> GMAT prefers active voice - ALWAYS !
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Why ? Because the verb tense was vs in is clearly sited with the indicator - "In the past twenty years"
-> Past tense of in the last twenty years !
-> 1960 to 1980, the verb tense indicate is pointered at 1980.
-> GMAT prefers active voice - ALWAYS !
@Bill, Awesome reply ! - Kudos
HTH!
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