Use of 'THAT'

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Use of 'THAT'

by Megs17 » Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:32 pm
Patrick Woodroffe is a poet and painter that is able to make a living at it
(A) Patrick Woodroffe is a poet and painter that is able to make a living at it
(B) Patrick Woodroffe is able to make a living as a poet and painter
(C) A poet and painter, Patrick Woodroffe is able to make a living at it
(D) Patrick Woodroffe makes a living as a poet and a painter
(E) By writing poetry and painting is how Patrick Woodroffe makes a living

Please help me with this , im confused :(

THAT can b used to modify human entity or not ??
In Manhattan SC its written that clauses led by pronoun THAT cant modify people
and sumwhere else i read that THAT can modigy both people and things .........
have my exam on 1st f Nov ....
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by shankar.ashwin » Thu Oct 20, 2011 11:56 pm
IMO, here 'who' would be a better choice, but since theres are no choices using 'who'
D seems the most concise way of writing the sentence.

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by avik.ch » Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:05 am
Megs17 wrote:Patrick Woodroffe is a poet and painter that is able to make a living at it
(A) Patrick Woodroffe is a poet and painter that is able to make a living at it
(B) Patrick Woodroffe is able to make a living as a poet and painter
(C) A poet and painter, Patrick Woodroffe is able to make a living at it
(D) Patrick Woodroffe makes a living as a poet and a painter
(E) By writing poetry and painting is how Patrick Woodroffe makes a living

Please help me with this , im confused :(

THAT can b used to modify human entity or not ??
In Manhattan SC its written that clauses led by pronoun THAT cant modify people
and sumwhere else i read that THAT can modigy both people and things .........
have my exam on 1st f Nov ....

This question is not testing the usage of "that". In this question I will go with D. D is best and concise and imparts correct meaning.

Regarding the usage of "that" - According to GMAT, "that" cannot modify people. You should use "whose" and "who".
Please refer Og-12 #110 SC. Moreover, just consider these few sentence,

Patrick, that is a poet and a painter, - awkward
patrick, who is a poet and a painter, - perfect
patrick, whose poetic and painting skills... - perfect

I hope you understand the difference

Please note that in GMAT "whose" can also modify places.


What is "somewhere" refers to - Is it any GMAT specific material ?

I hope this helps.
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by sam2304 » Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:16 am
IMO D.
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by avik.ch » Fri Oct 21, 2011 3:19 am
Can you please specify the source of this problem ?

If you need more help on this subject just PM me but honestly I do not think this is a legitimate GMAT problem.

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by mankey » Sat Oct 22, 2011 10:35 am
Why not B? Please help.

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by avik.ch » Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:09 am
mankey wrote:Why not B? Please help.

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"is able to" is redundant...

D is best and concise, B is correct but redundant.

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by mankey » Sat Oct 22, 2011 11:17 am
But I feel, the meaning also changes slightly with 'able to'. 'able to' brings in the struggling effect and since this is also mentioned in the original sentence, I preferred retaining it.

Any thoughts on this?

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by krishnakumar.ks » Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:54 am
mankey wrote:But I feel, the meaning also changes slightly with 'able to'. 'able to' brings in the struggling effect and since this is also mentioned in the original sentence, I preferred retaining it.

Any thoughts on this?

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Hi mankey, I think the problem with B, apart from not being concise, is the absence of an article "a" in front of the word poetry.
Shouldn't it say a poet and a painter ??

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by vaibhavgupta » Fri Nov 04, 2011 12:29 pm
Megs17 wrote:Patrick Woodroffe is a poet and painter that is able to make a living at it
(A) Patrick Woodroffe is a poet and painter that is able to make a living at it
(B) Patrick Woodroffe is able to make a living as a poet and painter
(C) A poet and painter, Patrick Woodroffe is able to make a living at it
(D) Patrick Woodroffe makes a living as a poet and a painter
(E) By writing poetry and painting is how Patrick Woodroffe makes a living
IMO D

Pls tell OA for this?
If OA is A, IMO B
If OA is B, IMO C
If OA is C, IMO D
If OA is D, IMO E
If OA is E, IMO A

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