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by GmatKiss » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:00 am
Where once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members by supporting the imposition of an alien tax on immigrant workers, after 1897 the United Mine Workers made a determined effort to enlist Italians and Slavs in its ranks.
(A) Where once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members by supporting
(B) Where once the union acquiesced to it English-speaking members' prejudice for the support of
(C) While once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members in support of
(D) While once the union acquiesced to its English-speaking members' prejudice in supporting
(E) While once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members in its supporting of

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by studentps2011 » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:12 am
'where' can only refer to a place, hence A & B out.

Of C, D & E, I don't like 'its' in E and C doesn't make logical sense. D could be the answer.
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by GmatKiss » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:20 am
Its not D!
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by studentps2011 » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:25 am
Hmm...is it C? Can someone explain?
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by GmatKiss » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:29 am
studentps2011 wrote:Hmm...is it C? Can someone explain?
Its not C as well!
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by aspirant2011 » Fri Oct 07, 2011 11:43 pm
GmatKiss wrote:Where once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members by supporting the imposition of an alien tax on immigrant workers, after 1897 the United Mine Workers made a determined effort to enlist Italians and Slavs in its ranks.
(A) Where once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members by supporting
(B) Where once the union acquiesced to it English-speaking members' prejudice for the support of
(C) While once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members in support of
(D) While once the union acquiesced to its English-speaking members' prejudice in supporting
(E) While once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members in its supporting of

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by BellTheGMAT » Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:35 pm
I am confused b/w A and C. Would go with A as C changes the meaning...
wats the source and OA??
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by sungoal » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:39 pm
The answer should be C.

This is the question from 1000 SC, question number 925. The OA in this source is given as A which is wrong.
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by GmatKiss » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:41 pm
sungoal wrote:The answer should be C.

This is the question from 1000 SC, question number 925. The OA in this source is given as A which is wrong.
Thanks for the clarification.
Could you please explain why C is preferred over others!

TIA,
GK
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by thestartupguy » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:45 pm
The answer choices narrow down to C n E.

In C, in support of is ambiguous where option E clarifies who is supporting.

so IMO E

what's the OA?
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by sungoal » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:47 pm
D is wrong as it saying "members' prejudice". Members can not have one prejudice. It should be "Members' prejudices".

Option E is wrong because of the awkward gerund phrase "supporting of", option C corrects this error by using "support of" .
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by smackmartine » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:50 pm
IMO C
I love how the meaning works...
Clearly we are looking for a contrast. where Vs while - while is the winner.
Also, after 1897 ....bla bla.. suggests that an event described earlier must occur before 1897 , so past participle must me used.

(A) Where once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members by supporting
(B) Where once the union acquiesced to it English-speaking members' prejudice for the support of
(C) While once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members in support of
(D) While once the union acquiesced to its English-speaking members' prejudice in supporting
(E) While once the union had acquiesced to the prejudices of its English-speaking members in its supporting of [never ever use possessive in front of verb+ing ]
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by GmatKiss » Sat Oct 08, 2011 11:51 pm
sungoal wrote:D is wrong as it saying "members' prejudice". Members can not have one prejudice. It should be "Members' prejudices".

Option E is wrong because of the awkward gerund phrase "supporting of", option C corrects this error by using "support of" .
Thanks,

Also in C i see, "in support of" to be a valid idiom. Does this give us an advantage.
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by sungoal » Sun Oct 09, 2011 12:01 am
GmatKiss wrote:
sungoal wrote:D is wrong as it saying "members' prejudice". Members can not have one prejudice. It should be "Members' prejudices".

Option E is wrong because of the awkward gerund phrase "supporting of", option C corrects this error by using "support of" .
Thanks,

Also in C i see, "in support of" to be a valid idiom. Does this give us an advantage.
Yes... :)
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by Jim@Grockit » Sun Oct 09, 2011 9:52 am
Of course, in real-life proper Standard English, where does not refer only to place. The GMAT may well prefer to simplify and have greater clarity, of course, but luckily there are the other errors.
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