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“calendar stick�

by garima99 » Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:47 pm
1. A "calendar stick" carved centuries ago by the Winnebago tribe may provide the first evidence that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them on systematic astronomical observation.
(A) that the North American Indians have developed advanced full-year calendars basing them
(B) of the North American Indians who have developed advanced full-year calendars and based them
(C) of the development of advanced full-year calendars by North American Indians, basing them
(D) of the North American Indians and their development of advanced full-year calendars based
(E) that the North American Indians developed advanced full-year calendars based


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by Frankenstein » Thu Jun 30, 2011 9:54 pm
Hi,
D changes the intended meaning of the original sentence. D says that calendars are evidence of North American Indians but in the original sentence, calendars are the evidence of an action(North Americans developing advanced calendars).
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by amit2k9 » Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:06 pm
D implicitly states that the evidence is for both N A Indians and the calenders.This is not the case. Hence POE.

In A,B and C them does not have a clear antecedent. hence POE.

E is clear.
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