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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:36 pm
rising inventories when unaccomapanied correspondingly by increses in sales can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth

A) when unaccomapanied correspondingly by increses in sales can lead
B) when not accompanied corresponding by increses in sales possibly leads.
C) when they were unaccomapanied corresponding sales increases, can lead
D) if not accomapanied by correspondingly by increased sales possibly leads
E) if not accomapanied by corresponding increases in sales can lead

plz answer and explain when or if , unaccompanied/not accompanied and corresponding/correspondingly
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by frank1 » Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:43 am
My take is E

Just corrected grammer...it was not answer change....i mistyped I take is E initially
Last edited by frank1 on Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:05 am, edited 2 times in total.
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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Thu Apr 22, 2010 2:33 am
frank1 can u give sum explainations
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by subgeeth » Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:46 am
The answer is E

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by arpita@gurome » Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:55 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:rising inventories when unaccomapanied correspondingly by increses in sales can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth

A) when unaccomapanied correspondingly by increses in sales can lead
B) when not accompanied corresponding by increses in sales possibly leads.
C) when they were unaccomapanied corresponding sales increases, can lead
D) if not accomapanied by correspondingly by increased sales possibly leads
E) if not accomapanied by corresponding increases in sales can lead

plz answer and explain when or if , unaccompanied/not accompanied and corresponding/correspondingly
The conditional "if" is more appropriate in this sentence because it refers to a hypothetical situation. This helps us narrow down our choices to (D) and (E). There is a big difference between "possibly leads" and "can leads". We should try and stay as close as possible to the author's intent. "Correspondingly increased sales" is awkward and unidiomatic. Thus (D) can be eliminated.

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by pradeepkaushal9518 » Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:59 am
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by akhpad » Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:26 am
When used in context of time.

if used for hypothetical or conditional sentence.

Original sentence contain "can lead to". If we remove "can", the meaning will changed.

Considering all above factors. E is the best.
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by arpita@gurome » Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:47 am
pradeepkaushal9518 wrote:Thanks

ARPITA for your Explanations . Can i know more about Gurome
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