hiring and funding

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hiring and funding

by 2010gmat » Mon Nov 30, 2009 4:33 am
Though some education experts claim that the low test scores of children in the city can be raised by hiring more
teachers and an increase in the amount of funding for textbooks and other supplies, others insist that doing this
cannot guarantee any improvement.
"¢ by hiring more teachers and an increase in the amount of funding for textbooks and other supplies, others insist
that doing this
"¢ by hiring more teachers and increasing funding for textbooks and other supplies, others insist that doing so
"¢ by a hiring of more teachers and increasing the amount of funding for textbooks and other supplies, other insist
that doing so
"¢ by hiring more teachers and increasing the amount of funding for textbooks and other supplies, others insist that
doing this
"¢ by hiring more teachers and an increase in funding for textbooks and other supplies, others insist that doing so
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by tanviet » Mon Nov 30, 2009 5:45 am
order of checking is: 1.grammar,2. meaning (meaning logic and change of original meaning" 3. style (consiseness)

lets check grammar

"doing this" is wrong. "doing so" is correct

check parallelism

only B is left

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by 2010gmat » Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:34 am
i agree b is the best but increasing funding seemed a bit awkward to me... is it really awkward ??

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