credit card payment

[spring_bustle]

Hi All,

Please tell me if the below sentence is correct.

Credit Card payment can be done after 24 hours of a beneficiary customer being added.

If incorrect , please give me the correct one.

Spring

[Gaurav Yadav]

I think the rule here is 'Keep It Simple & Sweet'.

Credit card payment can be done after 24 hours of adding a beneficiary customer.

I don't feel any need of 'being' here.

[spring_bustle]

Hi,

I found the original sentence in netbanking of a famous bank !

Any other answers ?

Spring