Studies Show That

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Studies Show That

by perfectstranger » Tue Jun 16, 2009 4:03 pm
9. Studies show that young people with higher-than-
average blood pressure and their families have a history of high blood pressure are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition.
(A) and their families have a history of high blood pressure
(B) whose families have a history of high blood pressure
(C) and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family
(D) whose families have a history of high blood pressure running in them
(E) with a history of high blood pressure running in their family
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Re: Studies Show That

by rs2010 » Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:15 pm
perfectstranger wrote:9. Studies show that young people with higher-than-
average blood pressure and their families have a history of high blood pressure are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition.
(A) and their families have a history of high blood pressure...breaks the flow of the sentence.
(B) whose families have a history of high blood pressure
(C) and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family...awkward
(D) whose families have a history of high blood pressure running in them...
(E) with a history of high blood pressure running in their family...'and' missing

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by ajay_deepak » Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:29 pm
I will go with E, but if and was not included in the underlined portion, and whose families would have sounded more correct.
What is the OA?

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by rah_pandey » Tue Jun 16, 2009 10:31 pm
In order to save everybody's time including yours please underline the portion of sentence to be corrected.(it can be done by selecting the sentence and clicking on u button.

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by raghavsarathy » Wed Jun 17, 2009 1:05 am
Ans - E

Reason - " and with" clearly describes the family of "people"

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by rahulg83 » Wed Jun 17, 2009 2:24 am
IMO B, whose is aptly modifying young people (whose can modify only people or places)
E -> with a history of high blood pressure running in their family???
blood pressure can't run in a family-awkward

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by benissleeping » Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:31 am
IMO B

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by perfectstranger » Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:35 am
OA B
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