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by aj5105 » Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:02 am
Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, interactions that affect global climate.

A. atmosphere, interactions that affect
B. atmosphere, with interactions affecting
C. atmosphere that affects
D. atmosphere that is affecting
E. atmosphere as affects



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by piyush_nitt » Sun Dec 28, 2008 12:29 am
C, D - OUT

'that' refers to atmosphere rather than interactions. Interaction affects the global climate not atmosphere.

E - OUT

As compares clauses.

A - Parallel

collects , transmits , affect

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by vittalgmat » Sun Dec 28, 2008 12:50 am
A is the best here.

While solving, I got a random thought.

What if the following were the ONLY choices.

atmosphere, interactions that affect
atmosphere; interactions that affect
atmosphere - interactions that affect


can someone pls comment which one would be better and why.
Your explanations would help me understand the appropriateness
of ; and - in this sentence.

thanks

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