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by kamit » Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:12 pm
Misplaced Modifier:

"coming out of departmental store, John's wallet was stolen"

how this can be corrected ?

Pronoun number error :

" The average number of moviegoer expects to see at least once scene of violence per film, and they seldom disappointed "

how to correct this ?
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by bblast » Fri Jul 22, 2011 12:05 am
kamit wrote:Misplaced Modifier:

"coming out of departmental store, John's wallet was stolen"

how this can be corrected ?

John's wallet was not coming out of the store. John was.

correction : Coming out of the departmental store, John lost his wallet


Pronoun number error :

" The average number of moviegoer expects to see at least once scene of violence per film, and they seldom disappointed "

The average number of moviegoers- the average number is singular- so they is incorrect



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