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by maihuna » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:00 am
Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
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by punitkaur » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:45 am
My answer is D

resulting- wrong verb tense - eliminates A,C

E - instead [redundant use of Unlike, already being used for contrast]

B - which cannot modify body
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by umaa » Mon Dec 14, 2009 4:07 pm
maihuna wrote:Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
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IMO E.

A - localized and resulting - wrong; IT doesn't have proper antecedent
B - Parallelism error. Comparing response and sunburn
C - Same as B
D - IT doesn't have proper antecedent; IT HAS HEALED changes the meaning
E - Correct

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by anabbasi » Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:20 pm
IMO D - correct answer

E) Unlike X Instead Y ..... is not the right use. [Correct me if I am wrong]


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by umaa » Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:23 pm
anabbasi wrote:
E) Unlike X Instead Y ..... is not the right use. [Correct me if I am wrong]
You're right. But in D what does IT refer to?
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by chrispy » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:04 pm
You're right. But in D what does IT refer to?
Due to its placement, "IT" should refer to "the injured area."
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by tanviet » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:04 pm
I check grammar before meaning logic.

check grammar

"unlike" phrase and "with" phrase are modifier and so they can not stand side by side because they can not modify each other. A and C are out

"in which" and "where" refer to "cuts and sprains". this is ok. However, "unlike ...response" needs a noun which is comparable to "response". B is out because "response" is not comparable to "sunburn" logically.

"until healing" in E means that "swelling ans stiffness heal". This is not logic. Moreover, "instead" is redundant.

D is left
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by maihuna » Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:49 am
duongthang wrote:I check grammar before meaning logic.

check grammar

"unlike" phrase and "with" phrase are modifier and so they can not stand side by side because they can not modify each other. A and C are out

"in which" and "where" refer to "cuts and sprains". this is ok. However, "unlike ...response" needs a noun which is comparable to "response". B is out because "response" is not comparable to "sunburn" logically.

"until healing" in E means that "swelling ans stiffness heal". This is not logic. Moreover, "instead" is redundant.

D is left
D has tons of issue, pick them as you want:

Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.

As you can see: Intruder "it" is the biggest issue
healed and dividing are not parallel.
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by pandeyvineet24 » Tue Dec 15, 2009 8:39 am
IMO the answer should be D.
"IT" in D is referring to injured area.

in A the pepositional phrase starting with "WITH" describes what?, "cuts and sprains" or the "response". I think we need "in which" here.
in E - "intsead" is redundant.
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by mehravikas » Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:28 pm
"It" refers to the injured area. IMO - D
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by brick2009 » Tue Dec 15, 2009 6:49 pm
IMO: D

It refers to injured area.

E: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing ...

the tense is incorrect in E..how can it be correct????????
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by ssgmatter » Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:47 pm
maihuna wrote:Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
[spoiler][spoiler][spoiler]Answer:A/E[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]

Any thoughts on this one guys.....Am not clear here
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by kevincanspain » Thu Jul 08, 2010 11:35 pm
maihuna wrote:Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
[spoiler][spoiler][spoiler]Answer:A/E[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]
The correct answer is D: 'it' refers to the injured area, the only singular noun in the relative clause. Dividing need not be parallel to healed, as the former is not acting as a verb but rather is an active participle that means 'that divides'.

In E, the use of 'instead' in conjunction with 'unlike' is a fatal error, as is 'until healing'
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by ssgmatter » Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:54 am
kevincanspain wrote:
maihuna wrote:Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body's more localized response to sunburn results
[spoiler][spoiler][spoiler]Answer:A/E[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]
The correct answer is D: 'it' refers to the injured area, the only singular noun in the relative clause. Dividing need not be parallel to healed, as the former is not acting as a verb but rather is an active participle that means 'that divides'.

In E, the use of 'instead' in conjunction with 'unlike' is a fatal error, as is 'until healing'
Thankyou Kevin!

Btw why A is wrong here?
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by crack30 » Wed Sep 14, 2011 5:36 am
I want to ask why unlike x..., instead y... is wrong?
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