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by iamcste » Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:09 am
iwg770 wrote:OA after some discussions.

I will go with D

after lot of trade offs between D and E

for generating electricity efficiently and

for heating


A, B and C-Not parallel

B -"to be" wordy

E-
I dont think so "heat homes" would be the broad usage and hence we should not consider parallelsim offered by "to produce " and "to heat Homes"
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by vishubn » Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:32 am
IMO D !!

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! dont u think heat ... factories and homes is wage ! it tends to chaneg the meaning !

Please correct me if i am wrong

my take on this is D

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by niraj_a » Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:32 am
i go for D, clear parallelism and flow.

E looked wierd to my post-lunch-sleepy eyes..in mining, heat etc. looked unparallel.
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by iamcste » Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:33 am
vishubn wrote:IMO D !!

@iamcste

! dont u think heat ... factories and homes is wage ! it tends to chaneg the meaning !

Please correct me if i am wrong

my take on this is D

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by iwg770 » Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:38 am
OA is D

Thanks a lot
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by gmat009 » Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:39 am
D looks more parallel to me than E.
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by iwg770 » Tue Dec 16, 2008 10:15 am
One more doubt:

suppose one more option
F) and producing energy on comercial scale, enough for generating electricity efficiently and for heating

Will this choice be parallel and if it is, then which choice will be better.

My doubt is how mining and to produce are parallel?
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by ronniecoleman » Tue Dec 16, 2008 10:32 am
IMO D
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by schumi_gmat » Tue Dec 16, 2008 1:25 pm
Hi IWG,

My doubt is how mining and to produce are parallel?

In option D, it is not mining parallel to produce.
Mining is an action so sentence goes like this mining for Heat to produce....

The parallelism is between for generating and for heating.
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