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by imskpwr » Sun Sep 09, 2012 6:39 am
Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters.

similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
in the same manner that they would use with
like they would handle
as they discipline
as they would

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by shekhar.kataria » Sun Sep 09, 2012 12:02 pm
IMO D

A :- correct but not concised "SIMILARLY TO THE FASHION" can be replaces with AS
B :- Wordy, USe of would is incorrect and changes the meaning.

Also, i think that the use of the IN THE SAME MANNER Is incorrect because it is the literal meaning of LIKE and we cannot use like to compare clauses.

C :- LIKE can not be used, Use of would is incorrect.

E :- incorrect use of would.

OA and OE please
imskpwr wrote:Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters.

similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
in the same manner that they would use with
like they would handle
as they discipline
as they would

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by imskpwr » Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:16 pm
shekhar.kataria wrote:IMO D

A :- correct but not concised "SIMILARLY TO THE FASHION" can be replaces with AS
B :- Wordy, USe of would is incorrect and changes the meaning.

Also, i think that the use of the IN THE SAME MANNER Is incorrect because it is the literal meaning of LIKE and we cannot use like to compare clauses.

C :- LIKE can not be used, Use of would is incorrect.

E :- incorrect use of would.

OA and OE please
imskpwr wrote:Popular child psychologists have advocated that parents discipline male children similarly to the fashion in which they discipline daughters.

similarly to the fashion in which they discipline
in the same manner that they would use with
like they would handle
as they discipline
as they would

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by lilouelle » Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:00 am
hi,
in kaplan verbal book it is written that the OA is E
I found D.
do not understand the use of would.....

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by shekhar.kataria » Mon Sep 24, 2012 2:07 am
OA and OE please ????
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