BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Researchers have announced

Expert replies
by atulmangal » Thu Apr 07, 2011 10:04 am
Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer's security surveillance system, of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.

A. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that
B. of which, worldwide, there are 200,000 of that type, and which can interfere with pacemakers, and
C. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, they can interfere with pacemakers and
D. 200,000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers, and
E. 200,000 of that type existing worldwide and can interfere with pacemakers, and
Join the discussion
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by aspirant2011 » Thu Apr 07, 2011 10:41 am
Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer's security surveillance system, of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.

A. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that
B. of which, worldwide, there are 200,000 of that type, and which can interfere with pacemakers, and -------> awkward
C. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, they can interfere with pacemakers and -------> they is ambiguous
D. 200,000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers, and ------> ing form not required
E. 200,000 of that type existing worldwide and can interfere with pacemakers, and

out of A and E, I would go with A option........wats the OA?????
Join the discussion

by bnair » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:06 am
IMO A

E. That type refers to what? also it's not balanced on both sides of 'and'

Whereas A has a clear sub clause after 'that'
Join the discussion

by rohu27 » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:09 am
removing the of phrase (which is modifying the security system - correct me if im wrong here)Q reads as follows:
Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer's security surveillance system can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.
options D and E seem to ask a question, of which type?

B-Researchers have announced that X and which can interfere with pacemakers\
C-Researchers have announced that X and they can interfere with pacemakers and

A- Researchers have announced that X can interfere with pacemakers and that Y - maintains parallelism too..that X and that Y
so A it is.
Join the discussion

by Target2009 » Thu Apr 07, 2011 11:14 am
IMO : A
Regards
Abhishek
------------------------------
MasterGmat Student
Join the discussion

by bubbliiiiiiii » Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:35 pm
Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer's security surveillance system, of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.

A. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that
B. of which, worldwide, there are 200,000 of that type, and which can interfere with pacemakers, and
C. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, they can interfere with pacemakers and
D. 200,000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers, and
E. 200,000 of that type existing worldwide and can interfere with pacemakers, and

Between A and E.

I believe the usage of which in A clearly modifies the magnetic fields instead of security survelliance system. Thus I feel A is much better organised than E.

Thus IMO A.
Regards,

Pranay
Join the discussion

by ankurmit » Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:51 pm
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer's security surveillance system, of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.

A. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that
B. of which, worldwide, there are 200,000 of that type, and which can interfere with pacemakers, and
C. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, they can interfere with pacemakers and
D. 200,000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers, and
E. 200,000 of that type existing worldwide and can interfere with pacemakers, and

Between A and E.

I believe the usage of which in A clearly modifies the magnetic fields instead of security survelliance system. Thus I feel A is much better organised than E.

Thus IMO A.

No Doubt A is correct answer.

@Pranay ..I think you are wrong here as 'which' in A does not modify magnetic fields but it modifies manufacturer's security surveillance system
--------
Ankur mittal
Join the discussion

by gmat_perfect » Sat Apr 09, 2011 1:26 am
atulmangal wrote:Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer's security surveillance system, of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.

A. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that
B. of which, worldwide, there are 200,000 of that type, and which can interfere with pacemakers, and
C. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, they can interfere with pacemakers and
D. 200,000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers, and
E. 200,000 of that type existing worldwide and can interfere with pacemakers, and
Grammatically A and D are correct to me, but there is a technical problem in D.

COMMA + VERB-INGmodifies the entire preceding clause and retains subject of the preceding clause.

Example:

I have scored high in math, leading my average score to a standard one.

Leading modifies the entire preceding clause.

if we think "lead" as a verb, I is the subject of the verb.

I lead the score to standard one.

Now,

Think about D:
200,000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers

Conceptually 200,000 is the subject of "interfering". Can a number interfere? nope. So D is wrong.

Answer is A though I don't like "there are".

Thanks.
Join the discussion

by champmag » Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:54 am
IMO: A for maintaining parallelism
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1