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by mankey » Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:10 am
That the new managing editor rose from the publication's "soft" new sections to a leadership position is more of a landmark in the industry than her being a woman.

A. her being a woman
B. being a woman is
C. her womanhood
D. that she was a woman
E. that she is a woman

Please help.

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by rijul007 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:38 am
Option B
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by ranjeet75 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:36 am
IMO E

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by mankey » Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:06 am
Looks to E to me. Dont have an OA. Someone please help.

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by immaculatesahai » Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:07 pm
mankey wrote:Looks to E to me. Dont have an OA. Someone please help.

Thanks.
Mankey,

The answer is infact E. This question is from the Brutal SC 70 list. The moment we spot the conjunction "than" we immediately know that "than" is the parallel marker and the elements to the left and right side of "than" have to be grammatically and logically parallel. Since "that" is present in the beginning, in order to ensure parallelism we need "that" after "than".

Hope this helps.


That the new managing editor rose from the publication's "soft" new sections to a leadership position is more of a landmark in the industry than her being a woman.

A. her being a woman (not parallel)
B. being a woman is (not parallel)
C. her womanhood (not parallel)
D. that she was a woman (the statement is stating a fact, "was" usage is incorrect)
E. that she is a woman

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