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Confusing SC..

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by rahulg83 » Sun May 24, 2009 8:22 am
Ideally, groups focused on environmental justice should be concerned with how new government projects will impact local populations. Specifically whether the projects would pose an unjust burden for lower-income and minority communities.



* will impact local populations. Specifically whether the projects would pose an unjust burden
* will impact local populations, specifically whether the projects would pose an unjust burden
* will impact local populations and pose an unjust burden
* will impact local populations and, specifically, pose an unjust burden
* will be impacting local populations and posing an unjust burden

OA B.
Can anybody explain why it is so? I chose D
[spoiler]OE states that D changes the meaning of the original sentence. I didn't quite understand how??[/spoiler]
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Re: Confusing SC..

by Vemuri » Sun May 24, 2009 8:49 am
The author is trying to say that groups focused on environmental justice should be concerned with how new government projects will impact local populations and whether the projects would pose an unjust burden or not.

D - Does not consider the Yes & No options that the author is trying to convey.
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by cramya » Sun May 24, 2009 3:28 pm
The specifically part dives deep on what the concern must be which is best presented by a comma followed by specifically

If we put an "and" its like saying they should be
1) concerned
2) and specifically

which will make no logical sense

IMO specifically is part of the same predicate after concerned and its not a seperate predicate(since its not describing something new about the subject or identifying some new action) so we dont need an AND
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by cata1yst » Mon May 25, 2009 9:42 am
In D..."will impact" and "pose" also don't allign.
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by nervesofsteel » Tue May 26, 2009 9:35 pm
Ideally, groups focused on environmental justice should be concerned with how new government projects will impact local populations. Specifically whether the projects would pose an unjust burden for lower-income and minority communities.

How and whether should be used as both are raising a question here....

and , specifically is used as a continuation of the sentence..thus "," should be used....

Thus B...
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