Answer is E. "when unaccpmpanied correspondigly" sounds awkward and wordy. We want something along the lines of "when unaccompanied by ocrredsponding increases in sales..."
a)awkward and wordy
b) "possibly leads" is also awkward.
c) even MORE awkward and wordy than the original... unnecessary pronoun in addition.
d) "possibly leads" is awkward.
e) CORRECT! This gets rid of the wordiness of the original and adds no new errors.
a)awkward and wordy
b) "possibly leads" is also awkward.
c) even MORE awkward and wordy than the original... unnecessary pronoun in addition.
d) "possibly leads" is awkward.
e) CORRECT! This gets rid of the wordiness of the original and adds no new errors.












