Star will compress

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Star will compress

by caspermonday » Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:08 am
A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.

(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(C) After passing through a red giant stage, a star's mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

OA D
Why not B???
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by MaxPower » Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:22 am
I eliminated B based on the pronoun ambiguity - 'its' refers to the star, but it comes before the star in the sentence, making it look like 'its' refers to the red giant stage.

In other words, it makes it look like the change depends on the mass of the red giant stage.

A is also ambiguous with the pronoun 'it'; in C and E the modifier "after passing..." incorrectly modifies "a star's mass" or "The mass of a star" instead of modifying the star.

In D there is no pronoun ambiguity and the modifier correctly modifies "a star".