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by paes » Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:41 am
Faced with an estimated $2 billion budget gap, the city's mayor proposed a nearly 17 percent reduction in the amount allocated the previous year to maintain the city's major cultural institutions and to subsidize hundreds of local arts groups.

(A) proposed a nearly 17 percent reduction in the amount allocated the previous year to maintain the city's major cultural institutions and to subsidize
(B) proposed a reduction from the previous year of nearly 17 percent in the amount it was allocating to maintain the city's major cultural institutions and for subsidizing
(C) proposed to reduce, by nearly 17 percent, the amount from the previous year that was allocated for the maintenance of the city's major cultural institutions and to subsidize
(D) has proposed a reduction from the previous year of nearly 17 percent of the amount it was allocating for maintaining the city's major cultural institutions, and to subsidize
(E) was proposing that the amount they were allocating be reduced by nearly 17 percent from the previous year for maintaining the city's major cultural institutions and for the subsidization

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by Gurpinder » Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:45 am
is the "the city's mayor " supposed to be bolded?
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by paes » Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:55 am
Gurpinder wrote:is the "the city's mayor " supposed to be bolded?
thanks, corrected it.

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by selango » Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:57 am
A is correct..

Parallelism is maintained in A."to maintain" and "to subsidize"
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by Gurpinder » Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:02 am
IMO (A). Whats oA?

(A) proposed a nearly 17 percent reduction in the amount allocated the previous year to maintain the city's major cultural institutions and to subsidize
(B) proposed a reduction from the previous year of nearly 17 percent in the amount it was allocating to maintain the city's major cultural institutions and for subsidizing
(C) proposed to reduce, by nearly 17 percent, the amount from the previous year that was allocated for the maintenance of the city's major cultural institutions and to subsidize
(D) has proposed a reduction from the previous year of nearly 17 percent of the amount it was allocating for maintaining the city's major cultural institutions, and to subsidize
(E) was proposing that the amount they were allocating be reduced by nearly 17 percent from the previous year for maintaining the city's major cultural institutions and for the subsidization
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by paes » Wed Sep 08, 2010 6:26 pm
OA is A.

My confusion is that 'propose to' is the correct Idiom.
So I selected C straight away without realizing the parallelism issue.

Can you guys put some thought on it.

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by uwhusky » Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:22 pm
This question was categorized as "parallelism" question and not idiom, so I think the most important element should be parallelism.
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by paes » Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:12 pm
uwhusky wrote:This question was categorized as "parallelism" question and not idiom, so I think the most important element should be parallelism.
You can't say that it is a parallelism question so ignore the Idiom.
IDIOMS are equally or more important than parallelism.
If you find a wrong idiom in a sentence, then probably you will not go to check the parallelism there.

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by uwhusky » Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:20 pm
What exactly is your question here? Are you challenging the OA? I said nothing of picking an answer that demonstrates parallelism but ignores idiom.

There are a lot of sentence structures that have idioms but are not tested, but it doesn't mean you should ignore them. I thought I was directly answering your question, which is that this question is testing the usage of parallelism and not idiom. The correct answer does not have incorrect idiom; it just doesn't use the same idiom as C.
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by paes » Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:53 pm
uwhusky@

Thanks to address the question.

But probably you didn't get my question correctly.

I am not seeing the right usage of Idiom in A.

A is like : I propose a 17% reduction in the budget for this year < to subsidize the cutural event >.
C is like : I propose to reduce the budget by 17% for this year < to subsidize the cutural event >.

Please explain whether A is using the right Idiom and how.

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by uwhusky » Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:58 pm
I see what your question is.

Both forms are actually correct because "propose" could be either transitive or intransitive:

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictiona ... 1284015415

So they're both idiomatically correct, thus idiom is apparently not being tested here.

Additionally, here are some other OG questions that use the same form:

https://gmatclub.com/forum/question-rega ... 70235.html
https://www.beatthegmat.com/kidnly-expli ... 42014.html
https://www.beatthegmat.com/erosion-of-e ... 38928.html

They are all actual OG/Verbal Guide questions, but they're listed under SC1000. If you want to know their corresponding OG/VG guide question numbers, let me know.
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