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by sankruth » Tue Dec 18, 2007 9:12 am
In January 1994 an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan, Puerto Rico, leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of the city’s beaches.

A) leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of
B) with its cargo of its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted
C) and its cargo of its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
D) while it leaked its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean and caused the pollution of
E) so that its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, and they were polluting

OA is C...why not B?
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by theroadrunnershow » Tue Dec 18, 2007 9:38 am
i am not really sure but i think B is not correct because of parallelism.

ran off aground and...leaking - wrong

it should be "ran off aground and... leaked"

P.S. just check with Danielle
Abhishek sunku
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by seekmba » Tue Dec 18, 2007 8:52 pm
Hi Sankruth,
I'm a lilttle confused here, although C seems fine because polluting should make the senetence parallel, however

and its cargo of its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting

its cargo of its cargo: this seems to be redundant & awkward

Can you please confirm that there is not typo in the post.

Thanks

Hi Danielle, can you please provide your comments on this one. Thanks
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by sujaysolanki » Tue Dec 18, 2007 8:57 pm
B) with its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted it reference unclear
C) and its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
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by seekmba » Tue Dec 18, 2007 10:33 pm
I agree with Sujay,

if C is worded as

and its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting

the it is correct coz it maintains parallelism & avoids superficial parellelism.
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by CrazyGmatter » Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:10 pm
Wat's wrong in D???
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by GmatKiss » Sun Oct 02, 2011 10:57 am
IMO : C
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