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by asp_2010 » Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:31 am
Please help me with these:

1) A group of sudents who have begun to clean up Frederick Law Olmstead's Morning Park in New York City believes that the park needs not to be redesigned but to be returned to its former condition

1)believes that the park needs not to be redesigned but to
2)believe that the park needs to not be redesigned but to
3)believes that the park needs not to be redesigned but could
4)believe that the park needs not to be redesigned but to
5)believe that the park needs not to be redesigned but that it

Collective nouns should use a singular verb but if we go thru MGMAT SC guide, there is another rule .. " a number of" should have a plural verb and "the number of" should have a singular verb. Does that apply to "A group of" as well?
Any clarifications are most welcome...

2) That the new managing editor rose from the publications soft news sections to a leadership position is more of a landmark in the industry than her being a woman.

A. her being a woman
B. being a woman is
C. her womanhood
D. that she was a woman
E. that she is a woman

3. Legislation in the Canadian province of Ontario requires of both public and private employers that pay be the same for jobs historically held by women as for jobs requiring comparable skill that are usually held by men.

(A) that pay be the same for jobs historically held by women as for jobs requiring comparable skill that are
(B) that pay for jobs historically held by women should be the same as for a job requiring comparable skills
(C) to pay the same in jobs historically held by women as in jobs of comparable skill that are
(D) to pay the same regardless of whether a job was historically held by women or is one demanding comparable skills
(E) to pay as much for jobs historically held by women as for a job demanding comparable skills


4. In order to evenly and effectively paint a rough surface, it is necessary to sand it and apply primer before applying the paint.
(A) it and apply primer before applying the paint
(B) it and prime it and paint it
(C) it, then prime it, then paint it
(D) the surface and apply primer before you
apply paint to the surface
(E) the surface, apply primer to the surface and then paint it

I thought the sentence should have parallel structure and thought either B or C though both of them are not entirely correct.

5. A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as in the nation as a whole.

B. annual per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs to about 60, more than twice as great as that
C. California's annual per capita consumption of cigarettes declined from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as the drop
D. California has seen per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs annually to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as that
E. California has seen annual per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as that
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by papgust » Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:38 pm
1) IMO it's D. I think that the group must be plural given the context of the sentence. In the non-underlined sentence, you have "A group of students who have begun.." which makes me think that the author is trying to showcase a particular group of students rather from a whole bunch of students. So, the collective noun is plural here. Therefore, "believe" should follow instead of "believes". Also, for "not .. but " needs parallelism which is D.

2) IMO E. E maintains a good parallelism "That the new managing editor rose from the publications soft news sections to a leadership position is more ... than that she is a woman". D also maintains parallelism but "was" is absurd in this context. She is still a woman :).

3) IMO A. We have "requires.." which needs subjunctive mood. So, we need "that" instead of "to". This leaves us A and B. In B, it uses "should" which must not be used in a subjunctive mood. This leaves us A as winner.

4) IMO A. This is a toughie. I was confused b/w A and D. I was inclined towards D for the fact that it uses "the surface" referring specifically but "you" in D pricks me. So, my pick is A. B uses "X and Y and Z" which i think is awkward in GMAT. C is not properly connected and looks like a run-on sentence - "..necessary to X, then Y, then Z". You need "and" before "then Z". But even then, there is no parallelism among the processes (X, Y and Z).

5) Hey, you should either underline the original sentence or post the choice A. You cannot ignore both. Without either of two, question cannot be answered.

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by asp_2010 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:37 am
hey..extremely sorry , here u go with the 5th one:

5. A decade after initiating the nation's most comprehensive and aggressive antismoking program, per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs annually per person to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as in the nation as a whole.

B. annual per capita consumption of cigarettes in California declined from over 125 packs to about 60, more than twice as great as that
C. California's annual per capita consumption of cigarettes declined from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as the drop
D. California has seen per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs annually to about 60, a drop more than twice as great as that
E. California has seen annual per capita consumption of cigarettes decline from over 125 packs per person to about 60, more than twice as great as that

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by papgust » Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:03 am
Ok. IMO it's D for 5th.

You have a modifier "A decade... program" which must modify only California and not annual per capita consumption. So. Eliminate A and B.

In C has an invalid modifier (pointing to California's and not California). So, eliminate C.

Major difference b/w D and E is the modifier in the end. D states "a drop more than.." whereas E states "more than twice..". E could probably refer to immediate antecedent ("about 60") which is wrong. It must refer to the decline. So, "a drop more than.." is proper usage in this context referring to "decline".

Btw, you still haven't posted the OA's

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by thephoenix » Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:23 am
asp_2010 wrote:Please help me with these:

1) A group of sudents who have begun to clean up Frederick Law Olmstead's Morning Park in New York City believes that the park needs not to be redesigned but to be returned to its former condition

1)believes that the park needs not to be redesigned but to
2)believe that the park needs to not be redesigned but to
3)believes that the park needs not to be redesigned but could
4)believe that the park needs not to be redesigned but to
5)believe that the park needs not to be redesigned but that it

Collective nouns should use a singular verb but if we go thru MGMAT SC guide, there is another rule .. " a number of" should have a plural verb and "the number of" should have a singular verb. Does that apply to "A group of" as well?
Any clarifications are most welcome...
there few things which i understand
the number of and a number of follows a differnt rule--a number of is always plural and the number of is always singular
the present case is diff its of the form X of Y who/that Verb
there certain rules for this pattern google in the forum and you will find it
for now X of Y ( plural) who Verb(plural)----->implies that subject is plural and hence the verbs describing the subj will be plural and hence in this case its BELIEVE , so eliminate 1 and 3
among rest check parallelism not X , but Y ( X and Y has to be same in structurally and grammaticaly)
hence 4 is the correct option

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by asp_2010 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:00 am
The OAs given are: 1) A 2) E 3) A 4) A 5) D without any explanations and even I felt that the answer for first one is D.

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