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by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:51 am
Hi All,

In the below question OA is[spoiler] C.[/spoiler]...Can someone please help me understand why [spoiler]"C"[/spoiler] is better than[spoiler] "E"[/spoiler] ? What rule is broken by E ?

With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract
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by kc_raj » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:03 pm
IMO C

between C and E

E reads looking at their waterfronts as a way reads awkward
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Re: IMO

by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:12 pm
kc_raj wrote:
E reads looking at their waterfronts as a way reads awkward
Thanks kc_raj.

I also used the same reasoning as yours to kick out "E"....:-)

But could not figure out why it is awkward.

Can someone please tell why E is awkward.
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by mehravikas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:56 pm
Looking at can be used in the following ways -

1. What are you looking at?
2. I am looking forward to.....
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by mittalashwani13 » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:27 pm
Looking at - means to examine someone/something ... as given above by Vikas .."What are you looking at?" means What are you examining?

Looking to - means to expect something ... e.g. Students look to teacher to pass them...

Hope this helps...

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by madhur_ahuja » Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:44 am
How do we decide between is/are here ?
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by goelmohit2002 » Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:48 am
madhur_ahuja wrote:How do we decide between is/are here ?
There are these rules to be followed:

1. One of the Xs that/who <plural>
2. One of the Xs <singular>
3. only One of the Xs that/who <singular>
4. only One of the Xs that/who <singular>

The question here follows #1
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by madhur_ahuja » Tue Jun 30, 2009 1:01 am
goelmohit2002 wrote:
madhur_ahuja wrote:How do we decide between is/are here ?
There are these rules to be followed:

1. One of the Xs that/who <plural>
2. One of the Xs <singular>
3. only One of the Xs that/who <singular>
4. only One of the Xs that/who <singular>

The question here follows #1
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Re: Half Acres Shore land.

by goelmohit2002 » Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:45 am
goelmohit2002 wrote:Hi All,

In the below question OA is[spoiler] C.[/spoiler]...Can someone please help me understand why [spoiler]"C"[/spoiler] is better than[spoiler] "E"[/spoiler] ? What rule is broken by E ?

With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract
In the above sentence, option E has a complete independent sentence inside it.

"they can improve the quality of urban life and attract...."

Can it be a reason for kicking out the option E ?
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Re: Half Acres Shore land.

by dumb.doofus » Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:50 pm
goelmohit2002 wrote:
goelmohit2002 wrote:Hi All,

In the below question OA is[spoiler] C.[/spoiler]...Can someone please help me understand why [spoiler]"C"[/spoiler] is better than[spoiler] "E"[/spoiler] ? What rule is broken by E ?

With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

(A) is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(B) is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(C) are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
(D) are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
(E) are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract
In the above sentence, option E has a complete independent sentence inside it.

"they can improve the quality of urban life and attract...."

Can it be a reason for kicking out the option E ?
Well, there's only one reason to kick out option E.. Lemme show how I tackled this question...

First and foremost as you can see its a 3:2 between look at and look to...

You look at something, when you are staring or actually seeing something.. when you expect something in a positive way, then you "look towards" it..
You never say, "This month I am looking at my salary that I'll get on the 31st coz I am broke now"...
Instead you say, "This month I am looking forward/towards my salary that i'll get on 31st coz I am broke now"..
Having said that you can immediately strike out B and E

D is also out, as its doesnt match with the plural are...

Between A and C, first of all, let me say one thing.. the rules that you have put are not correct I can also give example for that..

Mohit is the only one of the 50 students who has scored 100 in maths. if we go by your rule, then the sentence is incorrect.. isnt it?? but NO.. the sentence is totally correct, because only one student scored 100.. The prepositional phrase "of 50 students" is modifying "one" and "that" is also modifying "one".. and so we use singular "has"..

This sentence is different because here it is not trying to say that ONLY cleveland is looking to its waterfront.. on the contrary it is saying by using "but" that it is just one of so many communities that are looking forward to their waterfront.. and so a plural is required here.. here "that" is modifying "communities" and the prepositional phrase "of a large number of communites..."is modifying "one"..

Hope this clarifies..
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Re: Half Acres Shore land.

by goelmohit2002 » Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:40 am
dumb.doofus wrote: Well, there's only one reason to kick out option E.. Lemme show how I tackled this question...

First and foremost as you can see its a 3:2 between look at and look to...

You look at something, when you are staring or actually seeing something.. when you expect something in a positive way, then you "look towards" it..
You never say, "This month I am looking at my salary that I'll get on the 31st coz I am broke now"...
Instead you say, "This month I am looking forward/towards my salary that i'll get on 31st coz I am broke now"..
Having said that you can immediately strike out B and E
Thanks.


dumb.doofus wrote: Between A and C, first of all, let me say one thing.. the rules that you have put are not correct I can also give example for that..

Mohit is the only one of the 50 students who has scored 100 in maths. if we go by your rule, then the sentence is incorrect.. isnt it?? but NO.. the sentence is totally correct, because only one student scored 100.. The prepositional phrase "of 50 students" is modifying "one" and "that" is also modifying "one".. and so we use singular "has"..
Hi DD, IMO the sentence "X is only one of the students who has..."

follows the rule#3 i.e. "only One of the Xs that/who <singular> "

Please tell if I am misssing something here.


dumb.doofus wrote: here "that" is modifying "communities" and the prepositional phrase "of a large number of communites..."is modifying "one"..
Hi DD,

I have a real confusion in these type of "that"/who...can you please tell why it is modifying communities and not immediately preceding noun i.e. lakes....as per Manhattan "that/who" etc. modify the immediately preceding nouns....but OG too follow the noun phrase principle as is the case here.

Can you please tell how to identify whether the modifier is modifying the noun/noun phrase.
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