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by mail.SuhailSharma » Wed Feb 18, 2009 9:55 am
Work that is not finished is not work at all, it is merely a botch, a failure.
A. all, it is merely a botch, a failure.
B. all, it is a botch merely, and a failure.
C. all; it is merely a botch, a failure.
D. all; the work merely is a botch and a failure.
E. all; the work being merely a botch, a failure.

OA after discussion.
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by awesomeusername » Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:16 am
My intuition says (C). "a failure" properly modifies "a botch". This is a case of a noun modifying another noun.

It can't be (E) because semicolons are used to separate two clauses. There is no verb in the second clause.

To use "the work" instead of the pronoun "it" makes it sound repetitive and wordy. So (D) is out.

"Botch merely" is incorrect. So (B) is out.

You can't separate two clauses with just a comma. So (A) is out.
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Re: SC-Work

by x2suresh » Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:30 am
mail.SuhailSharma wrote:Work that is not finished is not work at all, it is merely a botch, a failure.
A. all, it is merely a botch, a failure.
B. all, it is a botch merely, and a failure.
C. all; it is merely a botch, a failure.
D. all; the work merely is a botch and a failure.
E. all; the work being merely a botch, a failure.

OA after discussion.
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A,B -- run on setences.

E - being wrong
D -- wordy. "the work" can be replaced by "it"

C is the best.
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Re: SC-Work

by piyush_nitt » Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:30 pm
x2suresh wrote:
mail.SuhailSharma wrote:Work that is not finished is not work at all, it is merely a botch, a failure.
A. all, it is merely a botch, a failure.
B. all, it is a botch merely, and a failure.
C. all; it is merely a botch, a failure.
D. all; the work merely is a botch and a failure.
E. all; the work being merely a botch, a failure.

OA after discussion.
Happy Thoughts
A,B -- run on setences.

E - being wrong
D -- wordy. "the work" can be replaced by "it"

C is the best.
Agree with C

Suhail,
You are posting a really good questions.

Keep it up. but can you please let us know the source?

Thanks mate !
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by Bidisha_800 » Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:07 pm
100% (C)
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by deep » Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:20 pm
A. all, it is merely a botch, a failure.

C. all; it is merely a botch, a failure.

I am really confused between A and C :( . Can some one please explain the difference and what is run on sentence.

Thanks in advance
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by umaa » Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:04 am
IMO A.

C is wrong IMO.
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by dgr8onerip » Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:32 am
i am hundred percent sure about C

logic-
after at all, a semicolon must be used to state a following sentence which on its own is also meaningful
A,B are eliminated because of the missing semicolon
among C D and E only C is grammatically consistent
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by deepoe » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:11 am
what is the difference between A and C?
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by marcusking » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:42 am
I also agree with C. The sentence can be logically broken into different sentences, but since it is not the ';' must be present.
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by mail.SuhailSharma » Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:18 pm
OA-C
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