Sentence Correction

Persons, suffering from a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD, eat fava beans and discover that they trigger hemolytic anemia.


Persons, suffering from a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD, eat fava beans and discover that they trigger hemolytic anemia
If people suffer deficiencies from the blood enzyme G6PD, they discover that fava beans trigger hemolytic anemia when eaten.
Hemolytic anemia is triggered by people with a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD, who discover it eating fava beans.
Persons who suffer from a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD discover that eating fava beans triggers hemolytic anemia.
When persons suffering a deficiency of enzyme G6PD, a blood enzyme, eat fava beans, they discover that it triggers hemolytic anemia.

Persons, suffering from a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD, eat fava beans and discover that they trigger hemolytic anemia.

Persons, suffering from a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD, eat fava beans and discover that they trigger hemolytic anemia

If people suffer deficiencies from the blood enzyme G6PD, they discover that fava beans trigger hemolytic anemia when eaten.

Hemolytic anemia is triggered by people with a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD, who discover it eating fava beans. - Passive

Persons who suffer from a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD discover that eating fava beans triggers hemolytic anemia.

When persons suffering a deficiency of enzyme G6PD, a blood enzyme, eat fava beans, they discover that it triggers hemolytic anemia - WORDY


IMO: D

OA is D

just by logic, understand the meaning of the sentence.

Ppl with deficiency X eat Y which triggers Z.

This sequence is followed only in D
E is too wordy. by ambiguous IT. deficiency or enzyme.
B subjunctive incorrect.
A is 'Persons eat fava beans and discover that they trigger..' wrong.

Hence D

we can fasten the pace of selecting the answer choice by concentrating on non-essential and essential modifiers. In the original sentence,

Persons, suffering from a deficiency of the blood enzyme G6PD, eat fava beans and discover that they trigger hemolytic anemia

suffering from .... is a non -essential modifier. If we hide this modifier, the sentence reads as : persons eat fava beans and discover that.... does that make sense ? So, persons have to be modified by an essential modifier. Secondly, "they" in original sentence doesn't have clear antecedent.