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Last edited by nplaneta on Sun Jun 17, 2012 6:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Good essay, Nick.
A couple of points:
- You made this essay about art/music vs. drug treatments, and that's okay, but the prompt also mentions invasive procedures. If the prompt is art/music vs. drug treatments/invasive procedures, then you should mention both.
- Well written and nicely organized.
- I like how you suggested ways to fix the argument.
I'd give this a 5 or 5.5
One last point: always use official prompts when writing practice essays. You can also download them for free from the mba.com site.
Issue prompts: https://www.mba.com/the-gmat/test-struct ... 00606.ashx
Argument prompts: https://www.mba.com/the-gmat/test-struct ... 00606.ashx
Cheers,
Brent
