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After the Great Depression’s exceptionally high unemployme

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by varun289 » Sun Apr 28, 2013 12:55 am
After the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates, job prospects did improve in the late 1930's, but as late as 1941 nearly 1 in 6 people were still out of work.



After the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates, job prospects did improve in the late 1930's, but

Although job prospects did improve in the late 1930's after the Great Depression, a period in which unemployment rates were exceptionally high,

Following the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates, job prospects did improve in the late 1930's, and

While job prospects did improve in the late 1930's after the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates,

Despite the fact that job prospects did improve in the 1930's after the Great Depression and its exceptionally high unemployment rates,



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by aaggar7 » Sun Jun 02, 2013 7:38 pm
"Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates" phrase looks awkward.
The phrase "Exceptionally high unemployment rates of great depression" would have been better.

As per Manhattan SC guide,Whenever you have a time perios,quanitiy or other measurement as the first word,keep the prepositional phrase with of.

eg.Memorial day's week is too short.The correct form would be the week of memorial day..

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by bubbliiiiiiii » Mon Jun 03, 2013 12:53 am
varun289 wrote:After the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates, job prospects did improve in the late 1930's, but as late as 1941 nearly 1 in 6 people were still out of work.



After the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates, job prospects did improve in the late 1930's, but

Although job prospects did improve in the late 1930's after the Great Depression, a period in which unemployment rates were exceptionally high,

Following the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates, job prospects did improve in the late 1930's, and

While job prospects did improve in the late 1930's after the Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates,

Despite the fact that job prospects did improve in the 1930's after the Great Depression and its exceptionally high unemployment rates, - Wordy and awkward construction.



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Great Depression's exceptionally high unemployment rates conveys that exceptionally high employment rates are in possession of Great depression which is not the case.

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