Sentence Correction

* also, the way the gmat uses 'with ...', it must be followed by a noun or noun equivalent. so, for instance, you could say 'with her 15 recordings', but you can't say 'with her 15 recordings disappointing...' (which is no longer a noun phrase).


with introduces a noun or noun phrase

mr dos was a good man,with good ethics---------------perfect
mr dos was a good man,with good ethics making him strong-------bad
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