22. Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are talented, charismatic, and aspiring more to a solid career in the theater than to the lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.
A. are talented, charismatic, and aspiring
B. are talented, who have charisma, and who are aspiring
C. have talent and are charismatic and aspire
D. are talented and have charisma,and whose aspirations are
E. are talented and charismatic, and who aspire
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IMO:Aarpitad wrote:22. Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are talented, charismatic, and aspiring more to a solid career in the theater than to the lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.
A. are talented, charismatic, and aspiring
B. are talented, who have charisma, and who are aspiring
C. have talent and are charismatic and aspire
D. are talented and have charisma,and whose aspirations are
E. are talented and charismatic, and who aspire
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definitely E is the best.
just read it -
Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are talented and charismatic, and who aspire more to a solid career in the theater than to the lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.
A is bad, because of and aspiring
just read it -
Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are talented and charismatic, and who aspire more to a solid career in the theater than to the lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.
A is bad, because of and aspiring
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Yes, this is definitely parallelism. We need two adjectives and one verb, since "who are aspiring more to a solid career" does not make sense.
Only E provides that correctly.
Only E provides that correctly.
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