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by blackarrow » Tue May 12, 2009 8:21 pm
IMO E

All other choices are awkward
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by cramya » Tue May 12, 2009 8:42 pm
E wins by POE IMO

the development.... slowed
the rise ...anticipated

seems parallel

the more rapid the rise-> awkward A,B out

C-> passive out

D-> more rapid rising is awkward again
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by PAB2706 » Tue May 12, 2009 10:11 pm
even i chose E but the OA given is D....i find it is awkward.
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by kanha81 » Sat May 16, 2009 7:01 am
PAB2706 wrote:even i chose E but the OA given is D....i find it is awkward.
[D] is not awkward because it is addressing the question in active voice

[E] seems CORRECT, but is not because is using passive voice.

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