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by GmatKiss » Wed Aug 24, 2011 10:41 am
Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are
talented, charismatic, and aspiring
more to a solid career in the theater than to the
lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to
independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.

A. are talented, charismatic, and aspiring
B. are talented, who have charisma, and who are aspiring
C. have talent and are charismatic and aspire
D. are talented and have charisma, and whose aspirations are
E. are talented and charismatic, and who aspire

OA after few replies :)
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by force5 » Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:45 am
I will go with E. parallelism

actors who are.....talented and charismatic......and who aspire.....
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by Chaitanya_1986 » Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:51 am
+1 for E
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by mundasingh123 » Thu Aug 25, 2011 11:08 pm
GmatKiss wrote:Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are
talented, charismatic, and aspiring
more to a solid career in the theater than to the
lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to
independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.

A. are talented, charismatic, and aspiring
B. are talented, who have charisma, and who are aspiring
C. have talent and are charismatic and aspire
D. are talented and have charisma, and whose aspirations are
E. are talented and charismatic, and who aspire

OA after few replies :)
isnt aspiring ... a present participle . i thoughts present particples could be put in parallel to adjectives
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by GmatKiss » Thu Aug 25, 2011 11:55 pm
OA is E
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by mundasingh123 » Fri Aug 26, 2011 12:25 am
GmatKiss wrote:OA is E
The source is doubtful . A seems to be appropriate as well
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by saketk » Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:36 pm
mundasingh123 wrote:
GmatKiss wrote:OA is E
The source is doubtful . A seems to be appropriate as well

A is missing 'and'
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by mundasingh123 » Fri Aug 26, 2011 11:14 pm
saketk wrote:
mundasingh123 wrote:
GmatKiss wrote:OA is E
The source is doubtful . A seems to be appropriate as well

A is missing 'and'
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by arashyazdiha » Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:37 am
E is correct.
and for parallelism.
the comma between two clause and the 'and' is properly used.
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