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sc - "at" vs "to" & "of + verb+

by ccassel » Fri Apr 15, 2011 5:46 pm
How are the rules followed in this question?

With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

A. is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
B. is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
C. are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
D. are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
E. are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract

Answer is C
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by Target2009 » Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:26 pm
IMO: C
I remember solving this question in forum where many had nice n great discussion.

https://www.beatthegmat.com/2-questions- ... 65828.html
https://www.beatthegmat.com/sc-half-acre ... 39711.html

Just go thru above ..its very informative.
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by AIM GMAT » Fri Apr 15, 2011 11:08 pm
A. is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
B. is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
C. are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
D. are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
E. are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract

IMO C.

Eliminating A and B on basis of below condensed rule :- [Refer link suggested by Target for detail explanation by experts]

One of the Xs + <singular>
One of the Xs that/who + <plural>
Only of the Xs + <singular>
Only one of the Xs that/who + <plural>
The only of the Xs that/who + <plural>
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by HSPA » Sat Apr 16, 2011 3:57 am
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by force5 » Sat Apr 16, 2011 5:56 am
yes perfect C is the call. need a plural.
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by GMATGuruNY » Sat Apr 16, 2011 9:01 am
ccassel wrote:How are the rules followed in this question?

With its plan to develop seven and a half acres of shore land, Cleveland is but one of a large number of communities on the Great Lakes that is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract new businesses.

A. is looking to its waterfront as a way to improve the quality of urban life and attract
B. is looking at its waterfront to improve the quality of urban life and attract
C. are looking to their waterfronts to improve the quality of urban life and attract
D. are looking to its waterfront as a way of improving the quality of urban life and attracting
E. are looking at their waterfronts as a way they can improve the quality of urban life and attract

Answer is D
Question: What is Cleveland one of?
Answer: A large number of communities that are looking to their waterfronts.

In A and B, is (singular) doesn't agree with a large number of communities (plural). Eliminate A and B.

In D, its (singular) doesn't agree with a large number of communities (plural). Eliminate D.

In E, looking at (which means to gaze at) changes the intended meaning of the sentence. The correct idiom is looking to X (which means to consider X). Eliminate E.

The correct answer is C.
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