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by dadu » Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:19 am
Dr. Shiraz Minwalla, a young Indian string Physicist, is recognized for his many outstanding contributions, which includes his most recent works obtaining equations of Nonlinear fluid dynamics in 3+1 dimensions from Einstein's equation for black-branes in 5-dimensional anti-de-Sitter space.
(A) which includes his most recent works
(B) including his most recent works
(C) like his most recent works
(D) these include his most recent works
(E) which include his works most recently

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by Target2009 » Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:01 pm
IMO - B
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by ColumbiaVC » Wed Jul 20, 2011 1:35 pm
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by kkckc » Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:41 pm
I think the answer is B.

(A) which includes his most recent works : In this senetence, 'which' indicate the 'contributions' :thus, includes (X)
(B) including his most recent works: Good
(C) like his most recent works : we can only use 'like' for 'subject' comparison
(D) these include his most recent works: wordy, these (?!)
(E) which include his works most recently: changed the place of 'recently', distort meaning

Dr. Shiraz Minwalla, a young Indian string Physicist, is recognized for his many outstanding contributions, which includes his most recent works obtaining equations of Nonlinear fluid dynamics in 3+1 dimensions from Einstein's equation for black-branes in 5-dimensional anti-de-Sitter space.
(A) which includes his most recent works
(B) including his most recent works
(C) like his most recent works
(D) these include his most recent works
(E) which include his works most recently
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by jonathan123456 » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:07 pm
IMO B
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by aspirant2011 » Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:04 am
dadu wrote:Dr. Shiraz Minwalla, a young Indian string Physicist, is recognized for his many outstanding contributions, which includes his most recent works obtaining equations of Nonlinear fluid dynamics in 3+1 dimensions from Einstein's equation for black-branes in 5-dimensional anti-de-Sitter space.
(A) which includes his most recent works
(B) including his most recent works----> including modifies the precedent noun contributions
(C) like his most recent works
(D) these include his most recent works
(E) which include his works most recently

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by dadu » Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:04 am
That is correct. OA is indeed B.
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