Here is my analysis ---
The sentence construction is very similar to IF SOME-ACTION THEN GENERAL-OUTCOME (with certainty) - with IF and THEN words omitted. In this case for Y either Simple Present tense shall be used or a future tense shall be used.
A. providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows
are producing
<=== This is wrong as Present Progressive sentence correction does not make sense to specify a general outcome of certain action. @Ron, somehow I am not convinced with rejecting this option based on comma - I think bigger issue, in my opinion, is how to specify a GENERAL OUTCOME. Please correct me.
B. providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow
produces
<=== There are multiple mistakes in this sentence (1) providing and milked are not parallel (2) Holstein cow is singular so it does not go with pronoun them.
C. provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are
producing
<=== Again multiple mistakes here (1) provided and milking are not parallel (2) Present Progressive tense is not appropriate for a GENERAL OUTCOME.
D. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
<=== While this construction could have been right, but pronoun them does not match Holstein cows.
E. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce
<=== This particular option is without any grammatical mistakes. Though as Ron said - it would have been good to make the verb phrase parallel, rather than making cool parallel with obtrusive noun phrase "provided with" and "milked...". I think it's more of a style issue as Ron said.
@Ron, I would like to learn in what cases such past-participle based noun phrases are better stylistically. I am sure there are tons of learning here.
Thanks in advance.
The sentence construction is very similar to IF SOME-ACTION THEN GENERAL-OUTCOME (with certainty) - with IF and THEN words omitted. In this case for Y either Simple Present tense shall be used or a future tense shall be used.
A. providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows
are producing
<=== This is wrong as Present Progressive sentence correction does not make sense to specify a general outcome of certain action. @Ron, somehow I am not convinced with rejecting this option based on comma - I think bigger issue, in my opinion, is how to specify a GENERAL OUTCOME. Please correct me.
B. providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow
produces
<=== There are multiple mistakes in this sentence (1) providing and milked are not parallel (2) Holstein cow is singular so it does not go with pronoun them.
C. provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are
producing
<=== Again multiple mistakes here (1) provided and milking are not parallel (2) Present Progressive tense is not appropriate for a GENERAL OUTCOME.
D. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
<=== While this construction could have been right, but pronoun them does not match Holstein cows.
E. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce
<=== This particular option is without any grammatical mistakes. Though as Ron said - it would have been good to make the verb phrase parallel, rather than making cool parallel with obtrusive noun phrase "provided with" and "milked...". I think it's more of a style issue as Ron said.
@Ron, I would like to learn in what cases such past-participle based noun phrases are better stylistically. I am sure there are tons of learning here.
Thanks in advance.












