Henry VIII artifacts

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Henry VIII artifacts

by GmatGreen » Tue Jan 21, 2014 9:01 am
In 1982, archaeologists recovered Henry VIII's ship Mary Rose, which, having sunk in 1545, with more than 17,000 artifacts on board, everything from arrows and longbows to a barber-surgeon's chest containing items commonly used by sixteenth-century medics.

(A) In 1982, archaeologists recovered Henry VIII's ship Mary Rose, which, having sunk in 1545, with more than 17,000 artifacts on board,

(B) Henry VIII's ship Mary Rose sank in 1545 and, recovered by archaeologists in 1982, they found more than 17,000 artifacts on board,

(C) When Henry VIII's ship Mary Rose, which sank in 1545, was recovered in 1982, archaeologists found more than 17,000 artifacts on board,

(D) Having sunk in 1545, Henry VIII's ship Mary Rose was recovered in 1982 by archaeologists, finding more than 17,000 artifacts on board, with

(E) Finding more than 17,000 artifacts on board, Henry VIII's ship Mary Rose, which sank in 1545, was recovered in 1982 by archaeologists and it had
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by Patrick_GMATFix » Tue Jan 21, 2014 9:20 am
This tests modifiers, pronouns, and sentence structure. The solution below is taken from the GMATFix App.

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by dimochka » Tue Jan 21, 2014 9:23 am
Spoilered below.

[spoiler]Choice A is a fragment (no active verb related to the action of the archaeologist)
Choice B is a run on sentence with alternative passive/active voice, and with "they" referring back to the ship, which does not make much sense.
Choice C is fine and likely the correct answer (though a bit awkward)
Choice D changes the point of the original sentence from focusing on what was found to the fact that the ship was recovered. Furthermore, the comma and "finding" after archaeologist is incorrect. I also don't think this is the correct usage of "having sunk".
Choice E makes it seem that the ship found the artifacts rather than the archaeologist.[/spoiler]
Please confirm OA.
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