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the ailing mobster

by maihuna » Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:41 am
According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.
the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
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Re: the ailing mobster

by piyush_nitt » Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:50 am
maihuna wrote:According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.

the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted wrong

famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted - misplaced modifier
the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted - misplaced modifier

near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”

Correct - Active

Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
Looks correct to me. But passive

IMO D
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by ronniecoleman » Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:27 pm
IMO A
check for modifiers in the question !
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by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:18 am
IMO "A"

According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.

a) the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted
Correct.

b) famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
"According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor" cannot modify "famous"

c) the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted
"the ailing mobster" is not famous...it is the town

d) near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”
"According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor" cannot modify "near"

e) Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
"it" refers to what "The Godfather" or mobster. If we replace it with either of "Godfather" or "Mobster", then both of them independently make sense. So IMO pronoun referent issue.
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by maihuna » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:09 am
oa is A only. thank u all.
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by vivek.kapoor83 » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:11 am
goelmohit2002 wrote:IMO "A"

According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.

a) the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted

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Does this make sense....he refers to whom ? godfather or mobster...im not convinced. Can u explain.the bolded part doesnt make a sense
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by goelmohit2002 » Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:30 am
But this IMO "he" issue is there with all the options except "d"...

So vivek which option you would pick....?
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Re: the ailing mobster

by kanha81 » Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:19 am
maihuna wrote:According to Italy's top anti-Mafia prosecutor, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of the “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted.

A) the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather” and near to those he most trusted

B) famous because of “The Godfather,” the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted

C) the ailing mobster, famous because of “The Godfather,” came to take refuge in Corleone, a town near to those he most trusted

D) near to those he most trusted, the ailing mobster came to take refuge in Corleone, a town famous because of “The Godfather”

E) Corleone, famous because of “The Godfather,” was the town that the ailing mobster came to take refuge in because it was near to those he most trusted
This is quite an intriguing question. I picked [spoiler][D][/spoiler], because it correctly modifies "the ailing mobster" and "the town"

My question to those who are convinced that OA is [spoiler][A][/spoiler] is don't you think that "near to those he most trusted" incorrectly modifies town; instead the correct sentence- "near to those" must modify town, but "he most trusted" must modify the gangster.

Please throw some light :idea:
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by abhinav85 » Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:37 am
The stem of the question is to find out what is the subject over here.
Definately the subject over her is the ailing mobster not the town
Corleone.

So the question is about subject-verb agrement.
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