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by anujan007 » Sun Aug 05, 2012 3:42 pm
Reading through the responses above I think I got luck with D. :) Came down to between D and E.

I used the approach that only D fits best for the subject Elizabeth... and "she" seems redundant in E.

Good responses above though. Learnt through them. :)
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by sathishkumarjva9888 » Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:37 pm
A & B out - 'as she was' is unnecessary for a noun modifier.
C - 'in being' wordy ; 'had scandalized' - past tense is sufficient.
D - correct
E - 'she' redundant ; 'in suggesting' must be 'by suggesting'.

Moreover, in a subjunctive mood 'suggesting' must be followed by 'that+be verb', which makes D correct.
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by ndqv » Thu Jan 30, 2014 5:22 am
In B and C: "her suggestion of drunkenness being..." and "with the suggestion of drunkenness being..." - awkward - GMAT doesn't like this kind of structure
A: "in her suggestion" is grammatically wrong - at least it should be "by her suggestion"
E: "she scandalized many of her" - "she" is redundant

Choose D
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by stepan88 » Wed Feb 19, 2014 12:06 am
The only grammatically correct construction is D
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by rashedais » Sun Nov 04, 2018 10:30 am
GMATGuruNY wrote:
shovan85 wrote:During her presidency of the short-lived Woman's State Temperance Society (1852-1853), Elizabeth Cady Stanton, as she was a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters in her suggestion that drunkenness should be made sufficient cause for divorce.

A. as she was a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters in her suggestion that drunkenness should be
B. as she was a staunch advocate for liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters by her suggestion of drunkenness being
C. in being a staunch advocate for liberalized divorce laws, had scandalized many of her most ardent supporters with the suggestion of drunkenness being
D. a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters by suggesting that drunkenness be
E. a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, she scandalized many of her most ardent supporters in suggesting that drunkenness should be

OA D
In A and E, suggestion/suggesting that drunkenness SHOULD be made is redundant. To SUGGEST something -- all on its own -- implies that it SHOULD be done. Eliminate A and E.

In B and C, suggestion of drunkenness implies that DRUNKENNESS is what Elizabeth Cady Stanton was SUGGESTING. What Elizabeth Cady Stanton suggested was that drunkenness be made sufficient cause for divorce. Quite a different meaning. Eliminate B and C.

The correct answer is D.
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by rashedais » Sun Nov 04, 2018 10:31 am
GMATGuruNY wrote:
shovan85 wrote:During her presidency of the short-lived Woman's State Temperance Society (1852-1853), Elizabeth Cady Stanton, as she was a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters in her suggestion that drunkenness should be made sufficient cause for divorce.

A. as she was a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters in her suggestion that drunkenness should be
B. as she was a staunch advocate for liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters by her suggestion of drunkenness being
C. in being a staunch advocate for liberalized divorce laws, had scandalized many of her most ardent supporters with the suggestion of drunkenness being
D. a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, scandalized many of her most ardent supporters by suggesting that drunkenness be
E. a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, she scandalized many of her most ardent supporters in suggesting that drunkenness should be

OA D
In A and E, suggestion/suggesting that drunkenness SHOULD be made is redundant. To SUGGEST something -- all on its own -- implies that it SHOULD be done. Eliminate A and E.

In B and C, suggestion of drunkenness implies that DRUNKENNESS is what Elizabeth Cady Stanton was SUGGESTING. What Elizabeth Cady Stanton suggested was that drunkenness be made sufficient cause for divorce. Quite a different meaning. Eliminate B and C.

The correct answer is D.
What is wrong with "as" in answer choices (A) and (B)?
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by vietnam47 » Sun Aug 11, 2019 1:56 am
in the pattern
main clause+by doing
the subject of the main clause perform action presented by "by doing". we do not use "possessive+action noun" such as "her sugestion" for this pattern. so, choice A, B and C are gone.
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