BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

OG 10th edition- electronics industry

Expert replies
by eaakbari » Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:21 am
181. Because of the enormous research and development expenditures required to survive in the electronics industry, an industry marked by rapid innovation and volatile demand, such firms tend to be very large.

(A) to survive
(B) of firms to survive
(C) for surviving
(D) for survival
(E) for firms' survival


I did get the correct answer at B but was confused between B and E. The OE for not E is as follows.

[spoiler]In choice E, the illogical and awkward use of a prepositional phrase (for firms' survival)
buries the needed initial reference to firms in a possessive modifier[/spoiler]

Someone please explain
Last edited by eaakbari on Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:23 am, edited 1 time in total.
Whether you think you can or can't, you're right.
- Henry Ford
Join the discussion
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by akhpad » Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:41 am
"such firms" requires an antecedent.

So A,C, D are out.

"firms' survival" is possessive and "such firms" can't refer back to it. E out

Moreover, because of X -> X should be noun or noun phrase. So, "required" should act as adjective not verb.

Answer: B
Join the discussion

by eaakbari » Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:55 am
Thanks akhp. That was helpful
Whether you think you can or can't, you're right.
- Henry Ford
Join the discussion

by frank1 » Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:30 am
I felt that it was E
now i realize why i am not getting good marks in GMAT

I dont understand why guys are not underlining the error parts.....it is making reading and finding error more difficult....we have to guess,which could be the underlined part....
gmat is not about underlined part guessing i guess...lol
Join the discussion

by eaakbari » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:25 am
frank1 wrote:I felt that it was E
now i realize why i am not getting good marks in GMAT

I dont understand why guys are not underlining the error parts.....it is making reading and finding error more difficult....we have to guess,which could be the underlined part....
gmat is not about underlined part guessing i guess...lol
My bad, I have edited the question now.
Whether you think you can or can't, you're right.
- Henry Ford
Join the discussion

by frank1 » Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:34 am
eaakbari wrote:
frank1 wrote:I felt that it was E
now i realize why i am not getting good marks in GMAT

I dont understand why guys are not underlining the error parts.....it is making reading and finding error more difficult....we have to guess,which could be the underlined part....
gmat is not about underlined part guessing i guess...lol
My bad, I have edited the question now.
really thanks
It saved alteast 10 seconds even in this question, i guess(as underlined part was short)

any way thanks....may not be big issue but it really helps....
Join the discussion

by vscid » Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:52 pm
I was thinking until now that 'required of' is unidiomatic, but hey, its OG and u can't challenge it!
The GMAT is indeed adaptable. Whenever I answer RC, it proficiently 'adapts' itself to mark my 'right' answer 'wrong'.
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1