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by asp_2010 » Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:17 am
1)Although the invention of the printing press led to a significant reconceptualization of textual production in the fifteenth century, what has been equally significant in the twentieth century is the invention of the computer.
a)what has been equally significant in the twentieth century
b)equally significant in the twentieth century has been
c)no less significant in the twentieth century is
d)what was equally significant in the twentieth century were
e)no less significant in the twentieth century was

2)Scientists are currently trying to determine the extent to which tectonic plates have been shifted from their previous positions by earthquakes and other similar phenomena.
a)to which tectonic plates have been shifted
b)to which tectonic plates have shifted
c)of the shift of tectonic plates
d)of tectonic plates shifting
e)that tectonic plates have been shifted


3)It was anomalies in the orbit of Uranus that led to the discovery of Neptune.
a)It was anomalies in the orbit of Uranus
b)It was the orbit of Uranus showing anomalies that
c)They were anomalies in the orbit of Uranus that
d)The orbit of Uranus being anomalous was what
e)The anomalies in the orbit of Uranus was what
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by loveusonu » Thu Jan 07, 2010 1:32 pm
Whewwwwwwwww..
IMO
1>E
2>B
3>A

OA pleaseeee
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by asp_2010 » Thu Jan 07, 2010 9:37 pm
Pls give explanations as well. Simple answers will not help in understanding the flaws and concepts.

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by loveusonu » Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:11 pm
Please provide the OA is spoiler, I will provide the reasoning from thereon
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by viidyasagar » Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:07 pm


1)Although the invention of the printing press led to a significant reconceptualization of textual production in the fifteenth century, what has been equally significant in the twentieth century is the invention of the computer.
a)what has been equally significant in the twentieth century is
b)equally significant in the twentieth century has been
c)no less significant in the twentieth century is
d)what was equally significant in the twentieth century were
e)no less significant in the twentieth century was
the underlining has been correctly modified

option 1, 2 - has been - no need to use perfect tense here...completion of one event doesn't affect the other

c- 20th century is over..kindly move on

d - were.....although one useful invention is worth many discoveries....grammar is impartially brutal

e - was....correctly used..thank you very much

2)Scientists are currently trying to determine the extent to which tectonic plates have been shifted from their previous positions by earthquakes and other similar phenomena.
a)to which tectonic plates have been shifted
b)to which tectonic plates have shifted
c)of the shift of tectonic plates
d)of tectonic plates shifting
e)that tectonic plates have been shifted
excellent example of not shutting passive options blindly

a - "have been..........by earthquakes"........what more can i say??
b - passive voice is badly needed
c - extent of the shift.....many errors easiest one to spot - using 2 "of" is awkward
d - for me this option is bad english
e - wrong idiom (extent that)...but correctly uses passive voice

A for me

3)It was anomalies in the orbit of Uranus that led to the discovery of Neptune.
a)It was anomalies in the orbit of Uranus that
b)It was the orbit of Uranus showing anomalies that
c)They were anomalies in the orbit of Uranus that
d)The orbit of Uranus being anomalous was what
e)The anomalies in the orbit of Uranus was what

Again underlining problem in the original sentence

b - wrong subject....meaning changed
c - they were......who were???
d - an option with "being" always brings a smile
e - "was what led to" sounds awkward to me

the fight is between A and E.....A begins with a pronoun "it" which makes me unsure of A.....but E sounds more awkward than A with "was what"....hence E loses

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by asp_2010 » Thu Jan 07, 2010 11:23 pm
Wow... Congrats for getting all 3 right.....Can u pls elaborate on second one...why is passive voice required here and why b can be eliminated?[/quote]

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by viidyasagar » Fri Jan 08, 2010 1:15 am
asp_2010 wrote:Wow... Congrats for getting all 3 right.....Can u pls elaborate on second one...why is passive voice required here and why b can be eliminated?

Scientists are currently trying to determine the extent to which tectonic plates have been shifted from their previous positions by earthquakes and other similar phenomena
I am assuming the fight is between A and B for most of us.

Identifying the subject is crucial. Here, the subject is earthquakes, which appears later in the sentence along with an indicator "by".... hence "have been" is logically and grammatically coherent. (for e.g. the letter has been written by Rita)

Passive voice is generally less favored in GMAT but the "by earthquakes" part appears in the non-underlined segment mandating a passive usage

People tend to ignore passive usage as soon as it appears and the 1st half of the sentence - "Scientists are currently trying to determine the extent to which tectonic plates have shifted from their previous positions" makes passive usage unnecessary......but as soon as the "by earthquakes" part appears silently, "been" becomes compulsory. Most of us mark B.

In general, a lot of correct answers immediately follow a wrong option hence even the placement of the right answer is strategic here. Overall an excellent question and set of options.

This is a very common GMAT example, guess from Kaplan 800... reading the entire sentence is vital.

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by asp_2010 » Fri Jan 08, 2010 3:15 am
Thanks so much...u gave a very gud explantion

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by mmslf75 » Fri Jan 08, 2010 8:18 pm
Quote:
1)Although the invention of the printing press led to a significant reconceptualization of textual production in the fifteenth century, what has been equally significant in the twentieth century is the invention of the computer.
a)what has been equally significant in the twentieth century is
b)equally significant in the twentieth century has been
c)no less significant in the twentieth century is
d)what was equally significant in the twentieth century were
e)no less significant in the twentieth century was
the underlining has been correctly modified

option 1, 2 - has been - no need to use perfect tense here...completion of one event doesn't affect the other

c- 20th century is over..kindly move on

d - were.....although one useful invention is worth many discoveries....grammar is impartially brutal

e - was....correctly used..thank you very much



Vidya

Pls explain here...

It's said that do not relate in real world scenarios in SC
that shuts E

what abt C then ?

Can u pls helpon this one!

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