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When to use "which"

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by 123nobody321 » Sat Aug 31, 2013 2:52 am
Hi forum,

I am a bit unsure about when to use "which" and when not.

I have this example sentence and I do not know why if I can use "which" or not:
In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them as large or larger than Jupiter, which circle other stars.

Here, I can see that the phrase "most of them as large or larger than Jupiter" is a non-essential modifier because it is surrounded by commas, thus can be left out.
If I leave the non-essential modifier out, I can see that the "which" modifies the noun "80 massive planets". I learned that "which" can only be used when it modifies the noun preceding it. It cannot modify a whole sentence.
In our case here, it just modifies the preceding noun, so where is my mistake?
Is somewhere a short summary of the rules when one can use "which" and when not?

Help is much appreciated.

Best,
nobody
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by [email protected] » Sat Aug 31, 2013 1:57 pm
Hi 123nobody321,

Your sample sentence would need some "reconstruction", but here's one example that would use the word "which":

In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most as large or larger than Jupiter, which circle other stars.

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by 123nobody321 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 8:40 am
Hi,

thanks for your reply!
But I still have some more questions:
  • Is there a rule when one needs to use "which" and when not?
  • Regarding my thoughts in the prior post - where is my mistake? Because so far I cannot see why the sentence is wrong..

Thanks a lot in advance.

Best,
nobody
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by vinay1983 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 5:48 am
123nobody321 wrote:Hi forum,

I am a bit unsure about when to use "which" and when not.

I have this example sentence and I do not know why if I can use "which" or not:
In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them as large or larger than Jupiter, which circle other stars.

Here, I can see that the phrase "most of them as large or larger than Jupiter" is a non-essential modifier because it is surrounded by commas, thus can be left out.
If I leave the non-essential modifier out, I can see that the "which" modifies the noun "80 massive planets". I learned that "which" can only be used when it modifies the noun preceding it. It cannot modify a whole sentence.
In our case here, it just modifies the preceding noun, so where is my mistake?
Is somewhere a short summary of the rules when one can use "which" and when not?

Help is much appreciated.

Best,
nobody
Hi, for your question the answer is here:

https://www.beatthegmat.com/astronomers- ... 91529.html

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by sana.noor » Mon Sep 02, 2013 7:28 pm
"which cricle" is wrong i would prefer Circling
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