Dear Brian,
I am currently a US Marine 1st Lieutenant (Selected for promotion to Captain) deployed in Afghanistan. I am working on applications to Kellogg, Booth, Darden, Fuqua, and Anderson. I may also potentially throw a few darts at HBS, Columbia, and Haas if I have the time and resources and it doesn't regrade the overall quality of my other applications. To be perfectly honest, Kellogg is my dream school (since I am an Illinois native, and it seems like a better fit than Booth), and I'm pretty much willing to do as much as it takes to get in. However, I would be fairly content with a school such as Darden or Fuqua.
I took the GMAT several months ago, and scored a 730 (47Q 42V), and I am pondering a retake due to my subpar performance at the University of Illinois, where I graduated in 2009 with a 2.84 GPA in Political Science (a combination of wrong priorities and knowing that I was going to be a Marine Officer anyway.)
Work experience wise, I have leadership experience as the Assistant Officer in Charge of a section of 40 Marines, and I am currently leading a diverse team of 7 Afghan-American linguists and 2 US Army soldiers. I am currently performing very well, and believe I can acquire a very strong recommendation letter from my immediate boss, who is a British Royal Air Force Squadron Leader (Coalition Command). In addition, I have a diverse, multicultural background, having grown up in South Africa, Taiwan, and the United States. I speak Mandarin Chinese fluently and have proficiency in French.
I have engaged in volunteer projects such as leading my team of Marines on Habitat for Humanity trips, and volunteering as a tutor for homeless children at a local shelter. In addition, I am taking a Calculus course at Berkeley-extension in an effort to augment my quantitative credentials.
Can you provide me with sight picture of how many prospects look at each of the schools I mentioned? I understand HBS and Wharton are "slim to none", but what about the other schools, especially in light of my very subpar GPA?
Is there anything else I can do to mitigate that weakness beyond what I'm doing now, taking courses and perhaps increasing my GMAT score?
Thank you so much, I would be deeply grateful for any feedback.
I am currently a US Marine 1st Lieutenant (Selected for promotion to Captain) deployed in Afghanistan. I am working on applications to Kellogg, Booth, Darden, Fuqua, and Anderson. I may also potentially throw a few darts at HBS, Columbia, and Haas if I have the time and resources and it doesn't regrade the overall quality of my other applications. To be perfectly honest, Kellogg is my dream school (since I am an Illinois native, and it seems like a better fit than Booth), and I'm pretty much willing to do as much as it takes to get in. However, I would be fairly content with a school such as Darden or Fuqua.
I took the GMAT several months ago, and scored a 730 (47Q 42V), and I am pondering a retake due to my subpar performance at the University of Illinois, where I graduated in 2009 with a 2.84 GPA in Political Science (a combination of wrong priorities and knowing that I was going to be a Marine Officer anyway.)
Work experience wise, I have leadership experience as the Assistant Officer in Charge of a section of 40 Marines, and I am currently leading a diverse team of 7 Afghan-American linguists and 2 US Army soldiers. I am currently performing very well, and believe I can acquire a very strong recommendation letter from my immediate boss, who is a British Royal Air Force Squadron Leader (Coalition Command). In addition, I have a diverse, multicultural background, having grown up in South Africa, Taiwan, and the United States. I speak Mandarin Chinese fluently and have proficiency in French.
I have engaged in volunteer projects such as leading my team of Marines on Habitat for Humanity trips, and volunteering as a tutor for homeless children at a local shelter. In addition, I am taking a Calculus course at Berkeley-extension in an effort to augment my quantitative credentials.
Can you provide me with sight picture of how many prospects look at each of the schools I mentioned? I understand HBS and Wharton are "slim to none", but what about the other schools, especially in light of my very subpar GPA?
Is there anything else I can do to mitigate that weakness beyond what I'm doing now, taking courses and perhaps increasing my GMAT score?
Thank you so much, I would be deeply grateful for any feedback.
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