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Re: Prep 3

by iamcste » Thu Nov 20, 2008 4:45 am
moneyman wrote:Is it A ?

IMO D

the purchase of the Home,

the cost of improvements, and

any additonal payment of medical or educational expenses


Parallelism

Nothing wrong with A, but I dont see any parallelism there

Any inputs guys
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by amitabhprasad » Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:33 am
isn't use of "were" in "D" makes last part a clause ?
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by gmat009 » Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:01 am
I find E better than D.
E puts better parallel structure than D.
What's OA
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by niraj_a » Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:06 am
nah, D maintains the parallelism with of
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by rohangupta83 » Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:07 am
I'd have to side with iamcste for the parallel structure on this one.

imo D

as iamcste explained
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by jimmiejaz » Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:12 am
Can't it be A as it is comparing amount with cost,price and amount.
D compares amount with cost,price and payment

Please explain. I fully understand imcste's point though!!!
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by [email protected] » Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:58 am
I go for E. Look at D, [that were borrowed against the home] modifies [expenses], which makes no sense. It should modify [payment] instead

A is wordy, I think, [ amount.... to pay] = payment
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by rohangupta83 » Thu Nov 20, 2008 8:02 am
In Choice D

It states:

Any additional payment......... that were

isn't 'any additional payment' singular ???
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by logitech » Thu Nov 20, 2008 8:19 am
I think "OF..." and "OF..." construction is designed as a trick in this sentence for whom apply the rules of parallelism without paying attention to the core of the sentence.

If the amount of loan does not exceed - marks the beginning of our list

so X, Y and Z

exceed the purchase price of the home, the cost of improvements, and any additional amount borrowed against the home to pay for medical or educational expenses.

E is using almost the same parallelism here but it is changing to meaning to "any additional payment borrowed " by omitting the word, amount.

So A looks good to me.
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by iamcste » Thu Nov 20, 2008 8:26 am
logitech wrote:I think "OF..." and "OF..." construction is designed as a trick in this sentence for whom apply the rules of parallelism without paying attention to the core of the sentence.

If the amount of loan does not exceed - marks the beginning of our list

so X, Y and Z

exceed the purchase price of the home, the cost of improvements, and any additional amount borrowed against the home to pay for medical or educational expenses.

E is using almost the same parallelism here but it is changing to meaning to "any additional payment borrowed " by omitting the word, amount.

So A looks good to me.
As I mentioned A is not wrong, However is A using parallelism when particularly a list of items are mentioned

If yes, how are items parallel ??
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by karmayogi » Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:20 am
IMO A

B & C easy to eliminate.

D: If we remove of ... part then sentence will become "any additional payment that were borrowed." That has two problems: 1. payment is singular were is plural, and 2. we don't borrow payment.

E: additional payment borrowed is also wrong. We don't borrow payment.

OA plz?
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by iamcste » Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:33 am
karmayogi wrote:IMO A

B & C easy to eliminate.

D: If we remove of ... part then sentence will become "any additional payment that were borrowed." That has two problems: 1. payment is singular were is plural, and 2. we don't borrow payment.

E: additional payment borrowed is also wrong. We don't borrow payment.

OA plz?
why should I remove "Of" any logic-Is it pertaining to some rule
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by niraj_a » Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:39 am
OA is A, its a bloody 1000 SC question.
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by iamcste » Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:43 am
niraj_a wrote:OA is A, its a bloody 1000 SC question.
Niraj is right. I knew this!

@ Niraj-why bloody :roll:
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