Recent indications of weakness in the economy have led consumers to be more conservative with their purchases; so depressed have sales figures been as a result that the government has launched several initiatives to actively encourage consumer spending.
A.so depressed have sales figures been as a result that
B.the sales figures have been so depressed as a result that
C.as a result, so depressed has the sales been that
D.the resulting sales figures having been so depressed that
E.the sales figures have been so depressed that, as a result,
[spoiler]OA: A;
I think 'A' is just backward construction of 'B'
What's the difference in meaning/grammar between A & B?
Is 'E' grammatically wrong?
Had one of the choices been given as as a result, the sales figures have been so depressed, would it have become the best choice to choose?[/spoiler]
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what is the source, In A are there any commas missing.
as a result - These words are not consistent
as a result looks redundant with 'that'
as a result - These words are not consistent
as a result looks redundant with 'that'
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Yes, this is a confusing one.
So the Kaplan 800 explains : as a result should be closest to 'sales figures' as it is because of the 'sales figures' that the govt. has .....
Hence A is preferred over B & E as they misplace the modifier.
Though I personally believe the meaning is pretty clear with B as well.
So the Kaplan 800 explains : as a result should be closest to 'sales figures' as it is because of the 'sales figures' that the govt. has .....
Hence A is preferred over B & E as they misplace the modifier.
Though I personally believe the meaning is pretty clear with B as well.
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E would have double "that's" and there are verb issues with C and D, so we're left with A and B.
the only difference is that A more clearly ties "depressed" to the sales figures dropping. B almost makes it sound like that sales figures are "depressed" i.e. unhappy!
I'm not sure if this is really GMAT-equivalent, but it came down to meaning for me, here.
the only difference is that A more clearly ties "depressed" to the sales figures dropping. B almost makes it sound like that sales figures are "depressed" i.e. unhappy!
I'm not sure if this is really GMAT-equivalent, but it came down to meaning for me, here.
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Still can't able to make out what made option E incorrect. Kindly explain.VivianKerr wrote:E would have double "that's" (Even option A is having double that's) and there are verb issues with C and D, so we're left with A and B.
the only difference is that A more clearly ties "depressed" to the sales figures dropping. B almost makes it sound like that sales figures are "depressed" i.e. unhappy!
I'm not sure if this is really GMAT-equivalent, but it came down to meaning for me, here.
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E is incorrect because it changes the meaning. The original tells us that the economy caused the poor sales figures. E tells us that the government took action as a result of the poor sales figures.
A amd B are tricky, but I prefer putting "as a result" closer to "sales figures" than to "depressed".
A amd B are tricky, but I prefer putting "as a result" closer to "sales figures" than to "depressed".
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semi colon is used for independent clauses.
Also, when using transitional phrases or conjunctive adverbs.
examples -
I wanted to write;however, I was too lazy. Conjunctive.
I wanted to sing;as a result,I decided to join a class. transitional phrase.
B,E miss this rule.Hence POE.C and D have verb problems.
A is crystal.
Also, when using transitional phrases or conjunctive adverbs.
examples -
I wanted to write;however, I was too lazy. Conjunctive.
I wanted to sing;as a result,I decided to join a class. transitional phrase.
B,E miss this rule.Hence POE.C and D have verb problems.
A is crystal.
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(a) and (b) are both fine here. (a) is a little more scholarly/writerly in its style, but either would be fine on the test.
this is right -- (e) doesn't mean the same thing as the original sentence. because the original meaning is reasonable, it's best to keep it.Tani Wolff - Kaplan wrote:E is incorrect because it changes the meaning. The original tells us that the economy caused the poor sales figures. E tells us that the government took action as a result of the poor sales figures.
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(a) and (b) are both fine here. (a) is a little more scholarly/writerly in its style, but either would be fine on the test.
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