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spring_bustle: Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts; Posts: 14; Joined: Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:52 am; Thanked: 1 times

by spring_bustle » Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:54 am

Hi All,

Please tell me if the below sentence is correct.

Credit Card payment can be done after 24 hours of a beneficiary customer being added.

If incorrect , please give me the correct one.

Spring

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Gaurav Yadav: Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts; Posts: 17; Joined: Mon Nov 17, 2008 12:30 am; Location: Mumbai; Thanked: 1 times; GMAT Score:710

by Gaurav Yadav » Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:11 am

I think the rule here is 'Keep It Simple & Sweet'.

Credit card payment can be done after 24 hours of adding a beneficiary customer.

I don't feel any need of 'being' here.

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spring_bustle: Junior | Next Rank: 30 Posts; Posts: 14; Joined: Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:52 am; Thanked: 1 times

by spring_bustle » Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:11 pm

Hi,

I found the original sentence in netbanking of a famous bank !

Any other answers ?

Spring

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