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Post Wed Dec 06, 2017 6:19 am
Among the largest of the flying squirrels is the Japanese giant flying squirrel , measuring two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail, with a wingspan of more than a foot and a half , and it weights up to five pounds.

a.measuring two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail, with a wingspan of more than a foot and a half , and it weights
b. measuring two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail , a wingspan of more than a foot and a half , and weighing
c. which measures two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail , its wingspan is more than a foot and a half , and weighing
d. which measures two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail , with a wingspan of more than a foot and a half , weighing
e. which measures two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail , has a wingspan of more than a foot and a half , and weighs

OA: E

What's wrong with options B and D

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Post Thu Dec 07, 2017 7:41 am
Our big issue here is that we have a list of three ideas that we want to be parallel. In E, this is done correctly:

Among the largest of the flying squirrels is the Japanese giant flying squirrel, which:
    measures two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail

    has a wingspan of more than a foot and a half

    weighs up to five pounds


In B, we have

Among the largest of the flying squirrels is the Japanese giant flying squirrel:
    measuring two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail

    a wingspan of more than a foot and a half

    weighing up to five pounds


This is not grammatical. The sentence would be grammatical if "a wingspan of more than a foot and a half" described "two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail", as in

Among the largest of the flying squirrels is the Japanese giant flying squirrel, :
    measuring two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail (a wingspan of more than a foot and a half)

    weighing up to five pounds


But wingspan is a measurement of wingtip to wingtip (or fingertip to fingertip) - not head to tail. So this meaning doesn't work.

In D, we have a similar issue - a list that isn't parallel

Among the largest of the flying squirrels is the Japanese giant flying squirrel, which:
    measures two feet from the top of its head to the tip of its tail

    with a wingspan of more than a foot and a half

    weighing up to five pounds

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