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by capnx » Sun Aug 16, 2009 11:09 am
B makes the casual relationship stronger.

By doing A vs Doing A

By doing A, X does B. So X accomplishes B by doing A; A is almost required for B to happen.
IE: By studying hard, you beat the GMAT.
So you beat the GMAT because you studied hard.

Doing A, X does B. "Doing" is a participle phrase modifying X (or X's action) but there no direct relationship to B.
IE: Studying hard, you beat the GMAT.
So you beat the GMAT while studying hard, but "studying hard" may not be the cause of you beating the GMAT.
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by vishal1702 » Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:48 am
capnx wrote:B makes the casual relationship stronger.

By doing A vs Doing A

By doing A, X does B. So X accomplishes B by doing A; A is almost required for B to happen.
IE: By studying hard, you beat the GMAT.
So you beat the GMAT because you studied hard.

Doing A, X does B. "Doing" is a participle phrase modifying X (or X's action) but there no direct relationship to B.
IE: Studying hard, you beat the GMAT.
So you beat the GMAT while studying hard, but "studying hard" may not be the cause of you beating the GMAT.
well said capnx.....
i would also like to add that the uncertainty of the second part of the sentence makes By essential in the beginning of the sentence...by removing may, option E turns good enough:

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Hope this helps....
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