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I am slightly doubtful regarding certain advanced uses of pronoun ambiguity and reference- To illustrate my concerns I have cited three examples from the O.G
The first Two are regarding pronoun reference and ambiguity
The last concerns pronoun reference to a possessive noun.
Your reply will make the greatest difference. Thanks.
O.G 10
Q.67 Congress is debating a bill requiring certain employers provide workers with unpaid leave so as to care forsick or newbom children.
(A) provide workers with unpaid leave so as to
(B) to provide workers with unpaid leave so as to
(C) provide workers with unpaid leave in order that they
(D) to provide workers with unpaid leave so that they can
(E) provide workers with unpaid leave and
D is the OA..
-It is indeed the best option, however i have doubt whether "they" can illogically refer to employers. Because of this, B - also seems a contender.
-Is the "so as to" construction faulty primarily because it portends the wrong meaning -that employers provide unpaid leave in kind consideration of new born children- or it is a faulty grammatical construction so it is wrong?
Take question 51 in the Og 10.
-In Choice A "it" can correctly refer to vision or illogically refer to baby. There are other errors in the sentence but this is one of them.
So, clearly logic is NOT a basis for excluding pronoun ambiguity, rather it is the basis from which it stems. So many times OG has eliminated options citing pronoun ambiguity as an error( in which one of the referrant are indeed illogical)
As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated
about 20/500. or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be
rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated
about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated
about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated
about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would
deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.
Possessive pronoun
Manhattan Sc guide says that only possessive pronouns can refer back to possessive nouns. However in the following example an objective pronoun refers back to a possessive noun( godess bona dea's)
Among the objects found in the excavated temple were small terra-cotta effigies left by supplicants who were either asking the goddess Bona Dea's aid in healing physical and mental ills or thanking her for such help.
(A) in healing physical and mental ills or thanking her for such help (correct answer)
(B) in healing physical and mental ills and to thank her for helping
(C) in healing physical and mental ills, and thanking her for helping
(D) to heal physical and mental ills or to thank her for such help
(E) to heal physical and mental ills or thanking her for such help
The first Two are regarding pronoun reference and ambiguity
The last concerns pronoun reference to a possessive noun.
Your reply will make the greatest difference. Thanks.
O.G 10
Q.67 Congress is debating a bill requiring certain employers provide workers with unpaid leave so as to care forsick or newbom children.
(A) provide workers with unpaid leave so as to
(B) to provide workers with unpaid leave so as to
(C) provide workers with unpaid leave in order that they
(D) to provide workers with unpaid leave so that they can
(E) provide workers with unpaid leave and
D is the OA..
-It is indeed the best option, however i have doubt whether "they" can illogically refer to employers. Because of this, B - also seems a contender.
-Is the "so as to" construction faulty primarily because it portends the wrong meaning -that employers provide unpaid leave in kind consideration of new born children- or it is a faulty grammatical construction so it is wrong?
Take question 51 in the Og 10.
-In Choice A "it" can correctly refer to vision or illogically refer to baby. There are other errors in the sentence but this is one of them.
So, clearly logic is NOT a basis for excluding pronoun ambiguity, rather it is the basis from which it stems. So many times OG has eliminated options citing pronoun ambiguity as an error( in which one of the referrant are indeed illogical)
As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated
about 20/500. or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be
rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated
about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated
about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated
about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would
deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.
Possessive pronoun
Manhattan Sc guide says that only possessive pronouns can refer back to possessive nouns. However in the following example an objective pronoun refers back to a possessive noun( godess bona dea's)
Among the objects found in the excavated temple were small terra-cotta effigies left by supplicants who were either asking the goddess Bona Dea's aid in healing physical and mental ills or thanking her for such help.
(A) in healing physical and mental ills or thanking her for such help (correct answer)
(B) in healing physical and mental ills and to thank her for helping
(C) in healing physical and mental ills, and thanking her for helping
(D) to heal physical and mental ills or to thank her for such help
(E) to heal physical and mental ills or thanking her for such help
